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I need your opinion on these two basslines. I'm not sure about the first one... but the second one's okay.

Here's a 128k mp3 sample of them in the tune (which is in the early stages atm)

SAMPLE

both of them seem to be okay, BUT (dont get these next words too personal):

i just dont get it. why is everybody posting EACH and EVERY step of his production into this forum? i mean, what about creativity and self determination? asking in a way like "is that bassline okay" just seems (to me) like people cant decide alone what they want to do.
the production forum is for talkin ´bout techniques, hard-/software and so on...not for getting applause for the last 10 min of playing around in reason. i just feel like that´s killing creativity...dunno.

(>>> DUB-Section)

[sorry junglist for bashing your thread, but i wanted to say this for a long time...no personal thing!]


[if anyone does´nt understand this... -> f*** y** ...english is not my mother tongue, hehe ]

lol no offense taken at tall, I agree with what your saying. I posted this in the production forum because I could get some proper feedback from a larger majority of people who know what they're talking about in terms of music production rather than typical responses like 'cool' or 'rubbish;' or even ...okay

hehe

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'cool'



no but i liked it... kindalike toads
needs way more siiiinnneee
maybe smore distortion/layers i dnno

Junglist wrote: [...] or even ...okay

damn, u got me!
your right. i agree with greenseed, maybe you should some extra layers/ oscillators on these lines to make em sound thicker.

i use msn to get quick feedback, but u gotta get people that will give u onist and good feedback

Needs more reverb.