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Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 4:33 pm
by obiwan
I tried to do hip-hop, bashment and garage with these three latest ones, I know they're basic but I have a short attention span and then need suggestions and advice.

Mt Zion: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=A3MKD02N hip hop one

Flying-saucer chase: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=60RBF8J3 dubstep/garage u decide

Bishy: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=O1CMDAW7 bashment one, obviously!

Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 5:04 pm
by metalboxproducts
Jesus your peristant. You are right about them being basic. First thing i would do is add some rudamentry fx like reverb and delay.Play with the structure a little bit to add a little interest. No offence but i would also replace the synth sounds as they sound a little cheap. As i don't want to be completely neg i would say the tracks have all got a good groove and so have potential. They just need more work on them, but you know this, so do the bloody work.
The title of your post was pretty transparant :wink:
:R:
I don't even smoke.
Appeal to the more basic of people's interests :5:

Rebuttal

Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 5:31 pm
by obiwan
I don't even smoke.: You should start, at least it won't impair your spelling!!!
Appeal to the more basic of people's interests :5:[/quote]


yeah

Re: Rebuttal

Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 5:57 pm
by shonky
obIwan wrote:
metalboxproducts wrote:Jesus your peristant. (It's persistent.) You are right about them being basic. . First thing i would do is add some rudamentry??? (rudimentary) fx like reverb and delay."I swear the hip hop one has got reverb????."Play with the structure a little bit to add a little interest. True. No offence but i would also replace the synth sounds as they sound a little cheap.Their not cheap cos I didn't pay for them, theyre free! What you mean is they need to sound richer. As i don't want to be completely neg i would say the tracks have all got a good groove and so have potential. Better than your harsh sounding spunkoffs then .They just need more work on them, but you know this, so do the bloody work.
The title of your post was pretty transparant :wink:
:R: It's transparent as well, c'mon the "e" button on your keyboard must work!

I don't even smoke.: You should start, at least it won't impair your spelling!!!
Appeal to the more basic of people's interests :5:
If you wanted feedback you got it, which is what you were after wasn't it?

yeah

Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 7:11 pm
by obiwan
yeah

Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 2:38 am
by fullyrecordingz
lol

calm down rudeboi

Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 7:04 am
by metalboxproducts
I think you have over reacted slightly. I said you were being persistant becouse you were. I noticed you had asked for feed back in another post that was compeletly unrelated to your music , it was in a thread about someone elses record/ music/ what ever.... You had also posted these tracks up three times with three different titles, finely resorting to the 'FREE WEED' title of this thread.

My feedback was not dismissive of your tunes. It was what i thought. And you clearly new they were basic so it couldn't have been that much of a surprise. At least i didn't say they were shit and you should fuck off, which is what some people have said regarding other posts. I don't believe they are shit , i believe, like you, they need more work. I'm sorry if youv'e been upset about what i wrote as this was not my intention. Maybe if we had been sat down together, and not on an forum the tone would have come across better. :o

Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 9:47 am
by shonky
metalboxproducts wrote:I think you have over reacted slightly. I said you were being persistant becouse you were. I noticed you had asked for feed back in another post that was compeletly unrelated to your music , it was in a thread about someone elses record/ music/ what ever.... You had also posted these tracks up three times with three different titles, finely resorting to the 'FREE WEED' title of this thread.

My feedback was not dismissive of your tunes. It was what i thought. And you clearly new they were basic so it couldn't have been that much of a surprise. At least i didn't say they were shit and you should fuck off, which is what some people have said regarding other posts. I don't believe they are shit , i believe, like you, they need more work. I'm sorry if youv'e been upset about what i wrote as this was not my intention. Maybe if we had been sat down together, and not on an forum the tone would have come across better. :o
Don't be a little bitch, fight damn yer :evil:

Actually don't - violence is naughty

Re: sCATHING

Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 10:15 am
by forensix (mcr)
obIwan wrote: Dick= Laying into me about expecting comments, then being unnecessarily scathing about everything apart from "the groove". If you look at metalboxproducts tune post that I commented on I was mainly complimentary.I don't actually like his music, it souds like CRUSTY DRUMNBASS but the quality was fairly good, and I don't see the point of putting anyone down unnecessarily. Say whats wrong with my music by all means, but show the same amount of courtesy that you expect to get when you post.Also when someone wants to be excessively critical but can't even spell a sentence I will gun them about it.
if you ask for other producers for their opinions you expect them to be critical at least i do anyway

so when people say things about your tunes dont start insulting them cos theyre not licking your arse go back and listen to see if you can hear what they hear sometimes you'll think they're wrong sometimes you'll agree its all about the production process, take from it what you wish but learn from it

theres always been a nice attitude on this forum and i dont want to see that change

Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 10:16 am
by struggle
chillll

Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 2:00 pm
by fullyrecordingz
this punk should go on RWD and see how much he'd get eated alive on there. lolll

Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 2:13 pm
by metalboxproducts
Why did you edit your posts, Obi? :?:

Prick

Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 5:13 pm
by obiwan
FullyRecordingz wrote:this punk should go on RWD and see how much he'd get eated alive on there. lolll
What are you talking about? People don't post tunes on RWD! It's eaten, not eated. And incidentally where are you from in East London?

Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 5:14 pm
by obiwan
metalboxproducts wrote:Why did you edit your posts, Obi? :?:
Coz i felt guilty about calling your tunes Crusty style drum and bass. You did post a helpful comment after all.

Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 9:14 am
by metalboxproducts
obIwan wrote:
metalboxproducts wrote:Why did you edit your posts, Obi? :?:
Coz i felt guilty about calling your tunes Crusty style drum and bass. You did post a helpful comment after all.
safe then.

Re: Prick

Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 5:09 pm
by fullyrecordingz
obIwan wrote:
FullyRecordingz wrote:this punk should go on RWD and see how much he'd get eated alive on there. lolll
What are you talking about? People don't post tunes on RWD! It's eaten, not eated. And incidentally where are you from in East London?
Yeh they do post tunes blud http://www.rwdmag.com//forum/viewforum.php?f=9

and its da internet.. people make typin mistakes.

and agen its da internet.. u fink im tellin u wat endz I live in.

Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 5:15 pm
by fullyrecordingz
Why do u fink u can call me a prick? Youre the only prick here.
dont like sly merkers so I'll say it to you FACE what everyone on here thinks of your tunes...

THEY ARE SHIT

AND YOU ARE WASTE

who? what? where? when?

Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 10:02 pm
by obiwan
FullyRecordingz wrote:Why do u fink u can call me a prick? Youre the only prick here.
dont like sly merkers so I'll say it to you FACE what everyone on here thinks of your tunes...

THEY ARE SHIT

AND YOU ARE WASTE
er...When did I call you as prick? prick!

Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2006 5:24 pm
by RubiconMan
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Difficulty Level: Easy Time Required: 1 minute

Here's How:

1. Breathe in through your nose on a slow count of three.
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3. Breathe out through your mouth on a slow count of six.
4. Repeat two more times.

Tips:

1. If you feel light-headed breathe more slowly.
2. Practice three times a day and you will remember the steps when you are stressed out.