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First Dubstep Tune - Feedback? (be brutal!!!)

Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 3:50 pm
by wil blaze
Easy...

Finally got round to actully making some Dubstep (I'm hooked now!)

Check the tune let us know what you think... and be honest i can take criticism...

www.myspace.com/wilblazemusic

track entitled "One Down"

Peace

Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 3:52 pm
by wil blaze
shit i can't believe that was my first post lol

I've been trolling on here for so long i never clocked that i hadn't posted shit.

Sorry lol

Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 4:11 pm
by dermike
:)
I've heard worse.. That bass sound is a little too lame for me though ;)

Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 8:53 pm
by wil blaze
which one? the wobble bit or the sub?

Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 11:13 pm
by dermike
"Wobble"

Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 2:59 am
by wil blaze
fair enough

thanks for your input

Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 3:07 pm
by ballistics
I like it! Perhaps I would add some treble-sounds right in my face! It is VERY mellow...

Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 7:47 pm
by wil blaze
yeah that's what i'm more into - the mellower side of dubstep

might try and do something lively soon though

thanks for your feedback.

Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 10:03 pm
by clone.a.k.
you got a real handle on how you want them bass hits!
beautiful flow.

Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 10:49 pm
by shonky
Yeah really nice toon, likin the mellow vibes, but the growling bass and harshness of the drums seems a bit incongruous to the mix, everything else seems to have that nice underwater ambience to it. Loving the detail in the track, the arpeggiation/delay lines work really well.

To my tastes I'd go for lighter more brushy, more syncopated drums with a hint of reverb or delay, and maybe use a low pad rather than the growling bass, think it'd flow really nice like that. I'd offer my services for a remix, but I'm taking ages on the last one I started so best not eh :wink:

Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 11:33 pm
by wil blaze
big up all for the feedback... can't believe how many people have actually bothered to listen and give some input....

you don't get nothing like this on DOA believe!!!

peace

Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 11:31 am
by metalboxproducts
Well minimal, but with variation. :D

Posted: Thu Jul 13, 2006 12:21 am
by digital
Its a fiendish sounding one, i like it, but i would say it needs more bass. added u on myspace as well bruv. :Q: