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New dub

Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 3:23 pm
by vision
hi, im new to dubstep and this forum.
i made my first tack 2day and i would love to hear what u think.

http://www.myspace.com/vision4vision

its the first one on my page

Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 10:30 pm
by press
imo first 24 seconds are not needed. pretty simple wobbler bass could be more exicting, more and different automation on the lfo. more distortion midrange imo, dont have to go crazy but lits pretty simple soudning bass. other wise pretty decent, the mix works the lead melody thing is cool. arrangent works.

not bad for a first attempt not bad at all.

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 2:37 pm
by vision
tanxs. dubstep is alot harder than it sound to make. i normally make Dnb and harcore and its mutch harder when things are slowed down.

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 3:09 pm
by hugh
just keep at it once you've got the sound right like you have managed here you can only improve.
look forwards to hearing your stuff in teh future - i especially like the little melody that comes in.

Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 3:19 pm
by vision
ok so i made my second dub but stuff still dosent sound right. could people give me there toughts? its on my myspace.

thanxs

Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 3:55 pm
by black lotus
mute the rest of the track for a while and work strictly on the bass. make it FAT. also, i like the vocal sample but it occurs too many times, i feel.

but yeah, being that dubstep is bass-centric music, you should really work on that. other than that it's pretty good. i'm not a fan of melodic stuff like that, but that's just personal taste. from a production standpoint it's in the right direction.

$.02 USD

Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 6:12 pm
by dj t.i.t
its koool 4 some1 new man u got start some where inti !
keep doin it man u never no u might be doin collbs wid sukh knigth 1 day :P
kepp it on man!

Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 10:20 am
by vision
thanxs to all the people that gave me feedback b4. i have a new trck up on my myspace now. im starting to get the sound i want now. love to hrat what people think?

Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 10:02 pm
by POND LIFE
i dont like the melody at all, id go for something more brooding. try different scales out perhaps. apart from that, really quite good for a first try.

edit: by that i solely mean the actual notes used, the sounds are fine.