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subzer - knee seeker
Posted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 11:19 am
by subzer
work is never done, but its some sort of finished! still not mastered yet!
subzer - knee seeker
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?a ... DA1EDF86C1
its a 192, 320's on request... furthermore i'm open for a remix exchange, anyone?
comments appriciated!
Posted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 4:43 pm
by shonky
Productions good, bass certainly got some weight to it, but I'm not really feeling the track, doesn't seem to be enough of a hook to carry it - sounds quite lethargic (could be the heat though). Mind you not that much of a halfstep fella, so probably not the best person to ask.
Posted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 6:38 pm
by marsyas
Shonky wrote:Productions good, bass certainly got some weight to it, doesn't seem to be enough of a hook to carry it .
agree on this point, nice bass and drums are solid.
just need a stronger primary melody imo.
try and fit something and this tune would be quite nice !!
Posted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 11:10 pm
by subzer
thnxz guyz! know what y'll mean, somehow i just don't get it in. its kinda full of sound and i really have difficulties finding the right sound to fit in there...
Posted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 11:46 pm
by threnody
Listening....good intro, i really like the sound you've got on the hi hats and the beat works really nicely, especially those shuffling high hats...the bass too is nice good sound to it develops okay, breakdown is in the right kind of place...maybe some more drum switch ups or indeed a stronger melody....2/3 note pattern would fit nicely over the top, does sound bare but as the others say the elements you have got work...just needs that.....um...X factor!!!!!