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Check me New Track fubar - Savaged
Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 10:43 pm
by fubar
Hello everyone, jus finished a track, tell us if you're liking it
all feedback welcome, cheers!
Link
http://rasclatt.image-upload.org/Savaged.mp3
if you want a wav jus ask, cheers
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Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 3:25 pm
by fubar
bumpyer
Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 4:34 pm
by deepfreeze
it's ok,.. don't realy feel it thow,... sorry
and i can't realy hear the bass on my laptop..
Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 4:46 pm
by andythetwig
I'm not surprised you can't hear bass on your laptop... unless it's equipped with subwoofers... now there's an idea
I'm definitely feeling the second bit, when the initial straight breakbeat dissolves into the slower halfstep beat... liking some of those drifty samples at this point.
Some of the synths sound a bit twee, and the melodies are a bit conventional. The last note of the 4bar bassline goes up, not sure i like it... In general, more FX all around!
I reckon you can get it 100% more sinistre!
Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 5:42 pm
by fubar
cool, cheers for feedback, back to ze drawing board
Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2005 3:20 am
by dubweiser
Nice. But the tune's a bit empty in some parts and you need a stronger kick IMHO.
I agree with andythetwig you can get it more sinistre. Keep up the good work.