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chaoticpulse - nemesis(1st dubstep tune)

Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 3:47 pm
by chaoticpulse
hello dubstepers,

i'm more used to produced drum n bass, but this time i have tried to make a dubstep tune, there's some dub elements but overall it's rather dark so here it is

http://chaoticpulse.free.fr/chaoticpuls ... 192kps.mp3

or

http://www.myspace.com/cha0ticpul5e

any feedback will be grantly appreciated

Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 3:51 pm
by fullyrecordingz
downloadin.....

Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 3:52 pm
by fullyrecordingz
rrrAHHHH BOIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
sum nutty flex :lol:

Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 3:53 pm
by fullyrecordingz
i fink uv just invented a new genre

Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 4:06 pm
by shonky
It's very well put together, but the sounds a bit too digital, seems way too clean and sort of over produced. That evil laughing bassline when it comes in pretty good, but it doesn't quite gel with the sub and the sub sounds a bit too low in volume. The weight of the tune's thrown off by too much snare business, maybe try and bring that in now and again for effect as it doesn't really add energy when the rest of the tune's quite heavy.

The actual sub bass and drum groove sound like a good hip hop loop in itself, I think there's too much going on though, needs a bit more space and time to develop.

Posted: Tue Sep 19, 2006 10:04 am
by chaoticpulse
@fullyrecordingz: i knew it wasn't really dubstep,, but thanks for the new genre comment, wish it could be true

@shonky: about the mixdown, i should try to have a better bass management, to make this glue nicely, and maybe rearrange the whole tune to make a bit more minimalistic at some point

thanks for your comments, i appreciate them a lot

Posted: Tue Sep 19, 2006 10:40 am
by narcossist
bro thats an angry one :)

think shonky kinda covered the production bit, maybe listen to some old youngsta sets if you want it to sound more "dubstep" [check the placement of the snares etc and how tracks can be driven by hats rather than breaks].

that said as a kinda idm/breakcore track i'm into it. 8)

Posted: Tue Sep 19, 2006 11:09 am
by DeepThought
weirdly, and i dont mean it as any insult, this sounds like slow dnb..
productions good, but like said upthread theres too much goin on, esp in the break, it lacks space n swing..
narcossist wrote:that said as a kinda idm/breakcore track i'm into it. 8)

Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 11:14 am
by chaoticpulse
thanks guys, your comments are much appreciated

@narcossist: yes i haven't get my head around the dubstep syncopation, i will listen, i haven't planned to put a break in this one, but i can't help myself i have a too present dnb background
@deepthought: yes it sounds a lot like my dnb tunes but with a different tempo, i suppose i can't deny my influence