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here's a new attempt to dubstep, tell me what you think
all comments, advice, criticism highly appreciated

http://chaoticpulse.free.fr/chaoticpuls ... 192kps.mp3

or

http://www.myspace.com/cha0ticpul5e

intro is too long for what is actual being introduced.
when the beat drops u'd expect some sorta bass soon after but its bein held up by fake drops and all sorts. yeh an i reckon da bass is nice, could use a lil more sub. i like da singin too. and dat echoing synth sounds bare dark @ 4:13. over all i like it after it drops, some strings or suttin woulda been nice to make more of a melody,
da outro is cool too

thanks for listening,

yes there's some more work to do on the structure, i don't really have a clue on the standard dubstep structure, i would gladly appreciate some hints on this point

anyone else?