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New To The Dubtep Scene... Let me know what you think!
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 9:56 am
by danson
Just started producing dubstep nearly finnishd a few now, just want to know if your feeling the tune and any tips and pointers about how i can improve!RESPECT!
http://soundcloud.com/danson/danson-auditorium
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 12:57 pm
by koch556
Good work mate - great for a first effort. Now it is hard to give tips as everyone has a different idea about what they like. However, here are some of my thoughts...
I think when the tune drops for the first time, you should drop out the melody piano, and just have drums and bass.
The levels could do with some work, I think the melody and bass are a bit too loud in the mix and swamp the drums a little.
Maybe change the filter cutoff on the bass sound so you lose a little of the top end and get a deeper tone.
Perhaps a bit too much reverb overall which makes it sound a little too full if you get what I mean?
Just my opinion though
- Good structure, good beats and an inventive and melodic lead though which comes across as very musical - nicely done mate!
Word!
556
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 1:10 pm
by danson
cheers mate really appreiate the feedback... i know what your saying on the bass im not happy with it my self i want a deeper tone as its drownding out the other sounds... When ive finnished it which hopfully should be over the weekend ill re-post and have another look and see what you think! Cheers again mate much appreciated
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 2:55 pm
by koch556
Sweet! I will keep my eyes peeled and have another listen. I am trying to give feedback to all new producers as I think there is not enough of that on this forum really. Keep making them dubs mate!!! Pm when your new edit of this is done - would love to hear it!
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 6:50 pm
by osky
DANSON wrote:cheers mate really appreiate the feedback... i know what your saying on the bass im not happy with it my self i want a deeper tone as its drownding out the other sounds... When ive finnished it which hopfully should be over the weekend ill re-post and have another look and see what you think! Cheers again mate much appreciated
I agree with danson. I think the melody overpowers the bass a lot but seriousily good for a first effort. I've just started out too. keep it up
Posted: Mon May 04, 2009 11:55 am
by shoka
last tune pon ur mix...bit of tweekin 2 b dun but its a nice tune!
1 more fing brother...try n post on other ppl's stuff as much as possible...lets get our names out there fam!!!
