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A brand new track made by Bun-Zer0
Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2005 10:46 am
by bunzer0
This one is called "Microwave" :
http://fwf.gast00n.com/Bun_Zer0_Microwave.mp3
If u have the time to give a listen... and then maybe a feedback ?
Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2005 11:49 am
by bze
only drums? where did you put the atmospherics or bass?
to be honest, the only good thing about this song is the part somewhere past 2:30, with the horns etc. take this one apart and rebuild the track.
Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2005 5:50 pm
by pete_bubonic
SOme nice parts in the track, but I feel it does lack substance, although that bass kick is nice and with the sub it sounds good at about 3 minutes. But the track feels it lacks the gel to hold it together.
Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 3:01 am
by taxidriver
I like the drums but it seems that you used random sounds over it except for the horns. You could work a bit more and improve the arrangement and add other elements to give coherence to the whole track.