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Just put up this 320 version of a track I posted here last week. Feel free to grab it!

http://www.mediafire.com/?2mttxjjmzr0

This track has a huge potentital.

Ill just state a few things that sounded abit wrong with the track:

the drums are quite abit louder than the synths, try adjusting the sounds so you can hear the synths over the drums.

Theres a part in the track where the drums are really peaking in volume, so basicly, lower the volume your drums as i said in the last point.

EQ is something that i am very new to and i need to gain skill in that area but i suggest you look into equalising, its the best thing you can do with your track.

Thankfully for me, mkultra is helping me out with equalising my tracks, so im learning from him right now.

I think a silenced Drop would really suit this tune, i would point out a few spots you could do the drop. you can add me on aim if you want further info on the drop.




Why this track has huge potentital:

The synths sound good, the little 4 x 4 meeps sound really nice along with the drums.

The drums sound really original compared to other dubstep tracks, tone the volume down abit and they will be alot better.

The variantion is very good also, you dont just stick with the same old beat throughout. Theres apprigated, normal, faster/LFO's. I like that alot.

The voice clips are spot on, very nice addition.

The intro is good, 8 bars till the drums isnt very original but suits the track.

it does sound like slam, only at the start of the main synth though.
Good work on that though.

I would mention the bass but im listening on headphones, dam nephew is asleep in my room. as far as what i can tell, the bass sounds substantialy heavy.


I have a new rule on my list now, any track i listen to has to recieve feedback from me.
so,
Thanks for reading and feel free to add me on aim : n2riisk

Listen to my stuff if you like also. www.myspace.com/riisktones
www.youtube.com/enterriisk

And remeber to give feedback if you listen to a track here on dubstepforums.

sorry i could only listen on headphones. good luck with future tracks!


Bigg up!

Riisk wrote:This track has a huge potentital.

Ill just state a few things that sounded abit wrong with the track:

the drums are quite abit louder than the synths, try adjusting the sounds so you can hear the synths over the drums.

Theres a part in the track where the drums are really peaking in volume, so basicly, lower the volume your drums as i said in the last point.

EQ is something that i am very new to and i need to gain skill in that area but i suggest you look into equalising, its the best thing you can do with your track.

Thankfully for me, mkultra is helping me out with equalising my tracks, so im learning from him right now.

I think a silenced Drop would really suit this tune, i would point out a few spots you could do the drop. you can add me on aim if you want further info on the drop.




Why this track has huge potentital:

The synths sound good, the little 4 x 4 meeps sound really nice along with the drums.

The drums sound really original compared to other dubstep tracks, tone the volume down abit and they will be alot better.

The variantion is very good also, you dont just stick with the same old beat throughout. Theres apprigated, normal, faster/LFO's. I like that alot.

The voice clips are spot on, very nice addition.

The intro is good, 8 bars till the drums isnt very original but suits the track.

it does sound like slam, only at the start of the main synth though.
Good work on that though.

I would mention the bass but im listening on headphones, dam nephew is asleep in my room. as far as what i can tell, the bass sounds substantialy heavy.


I have a new rule on my list now, any track i listen to has to recieve feedback from me.
so,
Thanks for reading and feel free to add me on aim : n2riisk

Listen to my stuff if you like also. www.myspace.com/riisktones
www.youtube.com/enterriisk

And remeber to give feedback if you listen to a track here on dubstepforums.

sorry i could only listen on headphones. good luck with future tracks!


Bigg up!

I really appreciate the extensive feedback. I'll have another look at the tune and try and change a few things. I've added you on Myspace by the way.

Still available. 32 downloads and counting.

Listening to it now mate... Haven't listened to any Pendulum for a year or so, so thought I'd give it a listen..

Like what you've done with the synths and the melody of this tune
Drums and the kick especially are bangin' my system to sweet sweet bass love, ha.

It's pretty minimal, so I'd find myself listening to it whilst chillin' down, or relaxing..
Not the type of bass I'd listen to normally, but it's a decent enough mix.

Props

Cheers thanks for checking the track out

like it man, nice idea

Kontrol wrote:like it man, nice idea

Cheers!