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psychedelic dubstep...feedback please!! (Sun In Aquarius)320

Posted: Sat May 23, 2009 8:15 am
by sun_in_aquarius
heya!
This is a track 90% or so complete...not sure really what genre it is, thought some dubsteppers might find a familiar element or 2...??? would love to get some feedback and any areas you think it could be improved...maybe:
-too busy/not busy enough?
-arrangment?too long/short in sections or as a whole.
-mix?
...looks like im going to record some spacy style electric guitar for the breakdown courtesy of a friend so if u are interested in a demo when its complete let us know!
any feedback would be much appreciated and i would generally be stoked to know what u guys think as i dont really post on forums a great deal as i dont really know where 2 put it!
peace
jake, Oz

http://soundcloud.com/goaconstrictor01/ ... e-aquarian

Posted: Sat May 23, 2009 9:26 am
by bass hertz
Nice choon man. I am really feeling this. Elements of OTT, autechre, and italian deep dub. Nice appliance for the late night trip. I think on 1st listen that the female spoken-word would sound incredible if mutated in bombaman style, but hey... never imitate.

You gonna put in some space guitar parts?? yes... I recommend listeing to anything by Steve Hillage (GONG, System 7, 777, System 7.3, The Orb) for inspiration. Good luck man.

Would love a 320 of this now and one when done if possible.

Posted: Sat May 23, 2009 9:41 am
by sun_in_aquarius
thanks for the feedback brother, vox samples are of my flatmate,recorded a poem and then used some of her breathing and stuff in there aswell....will have a 320 out to you as soon as its done brotha!
boom.

Posted: Sat May 23, 2009 10:29 am
by bass hertz
:big up recording crew: :big up recording crew: :big up recording crew:

Posted: Sat May 23, 2009 11:31 am
by POND LIFE
sounds very well produced! im not into this kinda thing, i mean i love a bit of psy trance and psychedelic-tinged but otherwise normal dubstep but i cant really offer much feedback tbh! other than it sounds nice and you're doing a good job?

Posted: Sat May 23, 2009 12:52 pm
by vishnu
interesting samples in this one.. I almost felt it took too long to get into the "hook", but I enjoyed the listen nonetheless. keep it up mate :)

Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 1:33 am
by sun_in_aquarius
cheers bud!

Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 3:18 am
by tripwire22
this is a really deep track bro id also like a 320 whenever

Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 11:46 am
by sun_in_aquarius
no worries brutha! been getting some good feedback from friends and so on prob gonna add some more rythmical elements to get it driving a bit more and maybe warming up the kick and bass a bit and possibly shortening it...

Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 12:47 pm
by fuzz_2k
interesting sounds!! takes a while 2 get the groove but Nice :D

Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 4:04 am
by spkta
sounds like you got three or four tracks here! 10 minutes is kind of long, however, i really dig the tracks. only feedback i have is to maybe split it up into several tracks whenever the core sound of the track changes. dig it dude, especially the sample at the very beginning that sounds like squishy fucking :P

Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 4:28 am
by bass hertz
:j: cook it up :j: cant wait to get this mate :dinner: :eat: loving the length also.. pay no attention to anyone who sez its too long :wink:

Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 5:00 am
by sun_in_aquarius
SpKTA wrote:sounds like you got three or four tracks here! 10 minutes is kind of long, however, i really dig the tracks. only feedback i have is to maybe split it up into several tracks whenever the core sound of the track changes. dig it dude, especially the sample at the very beginning that sounds like squishy fucking :P
ha ha sik brutha honestly....i recorded chicken squishing in a bowl of honey soy sauce!!!ha ha

thanks heaps for the feedback,just waiting on a guitar track then will wrap it up!!! thanks again brutha's!!

Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 5:10 am
by sun_in_aquarius
vishnu wrote:interesting samples in this one.. I almost felt it took too long to get into the "hook", but I enjoyed the listen nonetheless. keep it up mate :)
thanks for the comment brutha,really dig ure track on the anachoic chamber cd,was the first dubstep cd i heard.....by taking to long to get into the hook do u mean the length of the introduction or the progression into the introduction of more sounds????cheers!

Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 1:22 pm
by freedomdanishbadman
nice one! would dig a 320 if your willing! :D

Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 2:22 pm
by sun_in_aquarius
will send some 320's out of the current version (rough mix aswell) and then ill send the finished version to everyone that asks in a week or 2 when its done!!! peace!

Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 12:57 am
by sun_in_aquarius
:o

Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 2:24 pm
by sun_in_aquarius
bump :)~ :D

Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 8:28 pm
by mingus
i like can i get a 320?

Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 11:48 pm
by bass hertz
dont forget me man. still wanting this great tune.