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Safe dsf crew, I'm back with a brand spankin new DAW- switched to Logic full time

IMO this is my best tune yet

Update; Now available on Virb and Myspazz ^_^


safe

Stapled Shut

EDIT: Updated link further down [/b]

still sortin out the mix btw
but there's the structure/ composition

slightly better mix-
stream or download here

New version, new link
see below

BUMP

also this is the final mix I reckon


http://www.divshare.com/download/7661047-f6e

Feedback appreciated- got bare views and no replies. Is that cos it's shit?

The tune is interesting and sounds very original to me. It has quite a minimalist style in a full kind of way (if that makes any sense ).

If I had to pick at it there would be 2 suggestions.

1: Maybe vary the lead bassline a tiny bit more. Could be different melodies or different sound all together.

2: There is quite a bit of space in the mid range that could benefit from a soft pad.

I am used to soundclick electronica forum where the whole point is detailed feedback, so I hope this is useful.

Duncan.

Dr Nimble wrote:
1: Maybe vary the lead bassline a tiny bit more. Could be different melodies or different sound all together.

2: There is quite a bit of space in the mid range that could benefit from a soft pad.

cheers for the feedback
more people than that must've heard it though...

(cheeky bump)

lovin the synth on stapled shut but yeah bassline needs bit more variation though mate.. but big tune i like it

also likin the mechanical as well, though its a tiny bit repetative, good vibes though

right so change the bassline then
cool.
I shall get on that.

cheers for FB