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				Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 3:45 am
				by futures_untold
				Deleted.
			 
			
					
				BAD KARMA
				Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 5:56 pm
				by mistiq
				Hi
I'm new here, so i thought i should put a song on the forum! any comments, tips, tricks or whatever are welcome!
http://soundcloud.com/mistiq/bad-karma-1 
			
					
				
				Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 7:04 pm
				by miretz
				currently working on this one:
http://www.sendspace.com/file/8xw60m
Let me know what you think!
btw I use Reason 4 

 
			
					
				
				Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 1:52 am
				by pets bud
				Can anyone give me feedback on this cut.  I was in weird mood when I made it or remixed it actually.  Just want to hear what people have to say about the idea.  If it works or not.
http://soundcloud.com/frostekz/maria-3 
			
					
				
				Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 12:44 pm
				by mistiq
				petS buD wrote:Can anyone give me feedback on this cut.  I was in weird mood when I made it or remixed it actually.  Just want to hear what people have to say about the idea.  If it works or not.
it's ok to say u were stoned or whatever!!  

 
			
					
				
				Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 5:21 pm
				by mikeknight123
				yeh this is the first song ive ever produced so please be gentle  
 http://www.zshare.net/audio/64739248d6c8edb1/
 
http://www.zshare.net/audio/64739248d6c8edb1/
im not 100% happy with the mixdown yet so some tips would be appreciated!
got some fun samurai samples in there  

 
			
					
				
				Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 7:34 pm
				by sub7
				
possibly add a soft synth pad in underneath the piano at the beginning of a 16 bar loop somewhere in the middle of the track, just to breath a bit of extra life into the track.  I know you have the one errie synth going in the back ground, just think a soft pad fits this kind of track....
Mind you, this is just a suggestion, I think it progresses very nicely and gets pretty deep man.....cheers...
 
			
					
				
				Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 10:43 pm
				by mikeknight123
				Neurotik wrote:mikeknight123 wrote:yeh this is the first song ive ever produced so please be gentle  
 http://www.zshare.net/audio/64739248d6c8edb1/
 
http://www.zshare.net/audio/64739248d6c8edb1/
im not 100% happy with the mixdown yet so some tips would be appreciated!
got some fun samurai samples in there  

 
Niice, my initial thoughts were maybe experimenting with a few more breaks in the intro, and layering the kicks, and maybe the snare more to give it that harder hit. Other than that i really like what you've done here  

. The samples are very nice and put to great use and the bass is fucking sinister  

.  I loved the drop at 1:48!  

 
Thanks a lot mate i appreciate the advice. The kick isn't quite as punchy as i would like. Right now i have 2 kicks one deeper one and one punchy one so i think if i just raise the punchy one in the mix a bit.
And yeh that drop is my favourite part 

 
			
					
				
				Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 12:56 am
				by hurlingdervish
				Yo i need some ideas  on this track
http://www.box.net/shared/pl4kg6jydx
i know theres no build to the drop...gotta do that
but what else?
much appreciated.
 
			
					
				
				Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 1:23 am
				by ylem
				@hurling
maybe you could strip it back a little and create some anticipation by introducing your melodies in little bits before everything comes in. Have a listen to just your sub/bassy bits and drums, where there is space put a melodic lick in there... And with the drums maybe you could bring those extra snare hits in gradually, til you've got all your bits bouncing off each other.
but seriously mate, i wouldn't do too much different to it, nice track.
			 
			
					
				
				Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 1:26 am
				by hurlingdervish
				ylem wrote:@hurling
maybe you could strip it back a little and create some anticipation by introducing your melodies in little bits before everything comes in. Have a listen to just your sub/bassy bits and drums, where there is space put a melodic lick in there... And with the drums maybe you could bring those extra snare hits in gradually, til you've got all your bits bouncing off each other.
but seriously mate, i wouldn't do too much different to it, nice track.
great advice man!
thanks alot
 
			
					
				
				Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 3:25 am
				by dignan
				Just put a new preview up on my soundcloud, it's the first tune I've worked on since all my others got deleted (still working on recovering them though, should be done soon), hence the title of the tune.  anyway - feedback would be greatly appreciated, thanks ya'll. 
peace
			 
			
					
				baah it got deleted before for some reason.
				Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 10:48 am
				by theartfulbadger
				let me just say i'm pretty new to all of this.
criticism welcome.
http://soundcloud.com/the-artful-badger ... unfinished 
			
					
				Back to the future
				Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 1:57 pm
				by gnome
				A track that I'm not quite sure is up to scratch what do you think? It contains back to the future samples
http://soundcloud.com/gnome-gnome/hello-past 
			
					
				
				Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 2:10 pm
				by manray
				You lots are waste gave bare feedback. Don't you know about manners.
			 
			
					
				Re: Back to the future
				Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 2:23 pm
				by gnome
				Neurotik wrote:
Link didn't work  

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How silly of me. The top track btw.  Apologies here:
http://soundcloud.com/gnome-gnome