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would really appreciate some critique and feedback on this track.
im going for a flying lotus-ish type feel.
comments, critiques, harsh critiques appreciated.
http://soundcloud.com/peyotecoyote/unfinished-7

http://soundcloud.com/aeium-1/corax
One more for you guys. Please tell me what you think.

would really appreciate some critique and feedback on this track.
im going for a flying lotus-ish type feel.
comments, critiques, harsh critiques appreciated.
http://soundcloud.com/peyotecoyote/unfinished-7

Dope. The only thing is maybe that synth is a bit too loud, it drowns out the drums quite a bit? You could try sidechaining it to the kicks or something. Awesome though, I'd be keen to hear it once it's finished.

coyotepeyote wrote:would really appreciate some critique and feedback on this track.
im going for a flying lotus-ish type feel.
comments, critiques, harsh critiques appreciated.
http://soundcloud.com/peyotecoyote/unfinished-7

I really like the atmosphere in this. Overall, just smooth out the corners. The treble kind of hit me unpleasantly around the :05, mark. Try setting the attack slower on the instrument or maybe try fading in the channel. The drums are too clicky for my taste, I would like to hear the drumsound itself and not the click. Maybe free up some headroom for the drums to balance it out better.

Keep working on it, I hope this helps.

wankstas.mp3 - 7.33MB

comment on this and ill comment on yours.

rickmansworth wrote:wankstas.mp3 - 7.33MB

comment on this and ill comment on yours.

Not bad. I'd bring the drums up a bit, maybe pan some elements out to widen your stereo image. Kick drum's a little softish.
I like the bass patch and some of the stuff you did with the support synths.

Just made this tune, here's the first draft. Feedback/Comments/Criticism?
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djaccel wrote: Just made this tune, here's the first draft. Feedback/Comments/Criticism?
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The sample is cool... I think you need to do something with the snare though. maybe make it a bit stronger or add some reverb? it lacks something. also, the main lead sound needs more variation... it gets a bit repetitve. maybe add in some rises and sweeps throughout? or maybe just an effect at the end of every 4 or 8 measures?

after that "shoot them in the head part", you should throw in some weird zombie or monster sound followed by gunshots. that would be cool

you've got a nice start here.

epoch wrote:

would really appreciate some critique and feedback on this track.
im going for a flying lotus-ish type feel.
comments, critiques, harsh critiques appreciated.
http://soundcloud.com/peyotecoyote/unfinished-7

Dope. The only thing is maybe that synth is a bit too loud, it drowns out the drums quite a bit? You could try sidechaining it to the kicks or something. Awesome though, I'd be keen to hear it once it's finished.

thanks alot for the comment. yeah im deffinatly gunna turn the main synth down. about sidechaining? ive only had FL8 for about a week, so im not entirely sure what that is, maybe you could help me out?

@ aeium, thanks alot for the critique, the more i listen to it, the more the drums sound clicky to me too.
il work on it some more and post it, hopefully il get some more good feedback, thanks

http://soundcloud.com/sam-underwood/apologise-remix


lets see this get shreaded...

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Hey guys, i've started working on my second dubstep track, well second track ever, im not really sure where to go with it, i know the drums need improving but im just out of ideas really, what do you think the good points of the track are? what do you think i should keep/change.

It's a cheese remix of freemasons's youre not alone now haha

http://soundcloud.com/corpus/freemasons ... us-bootleg


ps. how are people linking their soundcloud tracks on page so you can just play it there and then?

Flukey wrote:http://soundcloud.com/sam-underwood/apologise-remix


lets see this get shreaded...

Mate i love this, i think you need to tone the vocals down a bit, put a limiter on it, the vocals are a bit loud, maybe a bit of subtractive eqing is in order squire, but overall i think its solid, you nearly blew my speakers though innit.

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Wondering what you guys thing of this?! particularly in regards to the high pitched bleepy noise, cheers

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Flukey wrote:http://soundcloud.com/sam-underwood/apologise-remix


lets see this get shreaded...

I'm thinking that once it drops you should kill the volume of the piano a bit, and focus on the bass alot more,
The bass is perhaps a tad scratchy, something smoother sitting under it might sound slightly better.

The lyrics sound like they are skipping or something. not sure ifts a delay reverb effect or if it its conflicting sounds, try fcosuing your bass a little lower and your lyrics a tad higher :S

Also work on the general level of your mix, right now it is very loud, not sure if it is clipping :S but it definately sounds messy...

Otherwise the idea is stella and it is all sounding rather good

corpu5 wrote:Hey guys, i've started working on my second dubstep track, well second track ever, im not really sure where to go with it, i know the drums need improving but im just out of ideas really, what do you think the good points of the track are? what do you think i should keep/change.

It's a cheese remix of freemasons's youre not alone now haha

http://soundcloud.com/corpus/freemasons ... us-bootleg


ps. how are people linking their soundcloud tracks on page so you can just play it there and then?

Really nice sounding, however its all quite deep sounding, nothing stands out to strongly lots of things all working for the bass space, I would consider eqing or pitching the vocals to make them slightly higher, also high pass the reverb so that the lyrics remain up top and easy to hear and focus on, maybe the same could be said for fade in and out noise, as that hits at the same time as the bass and distorts the two slightly i think

rickmansworth wrote: Just made this tune, here's the first draft. Feedback/Comments/Criticism?
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Nice sounding, maybe work something more intersting out with the drums, I know the focus is on the synth, which all sounds good and moves lots, but it doesnt feel like its particularly strong, get a synth with more bass to accompany it, so that it really womps hard...

Would appreciate any crit from anyone, and will gladly return the favor, if you would like. peace
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drenster wrote:Would appreciate any crit from anyone, and will gladly return the favor, if you would like. peace
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Its sounding awesome, like the vocal walk in at the beginning and the littel noises dotted around in the background...

The pads in the background sound like they are cloaking the first wobble, and then when the bass is added so two are competeing a bit, I think once the sound drops those pads should go down a bit, and focus on the bass with some of those noises dotted around, it cleans up by the end actually, so maybe just look at the first half, also the windhcime sounding hats are quite disorintating sometimes, not sure they last for a quantized amount of time :S

Anyway its sounding class, keep on working,

Wouldn't mind some feedback on the post above

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thanks for the crit man, i will look into what you said, ill will gladly return the favor when i get back home, and have decent speakers to listen. peace

http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj/dust-storm
new track!
dust storm..dooms day

thierry_le_dj wrote:http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj/dust-storm
new track!
dust storm..dooms day

Not bad. Maybe add some more drums or sounds to the intro to break it up a bit, and it might be cool to use a filter or something to bring the track up before the drop.

Just updated this tune, changed up and reworked some drums, and changed the second drop up from the first a bit.
Feedback?

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Accel sheeeeez! that is a tuff beat man personally have no idea how to improve that, tooooo much.

put a cuple unfinished beats on here www.soundcloud.com/suspekt1
would really appreciate any feedback cheers!

Started working on this baby last night. I'm already changing the Right-panned hi hats as they were thrown in quick from some samples just to fill the space (the gist is there though).

Inspired by the film Holy Mountain


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