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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 10:55 pm
by thierry_le_dj
http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj (Dooms Day)
new version up on page!
feed back thanks..

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 11:44 pm
by sirlilfoot
ay check the track... been producin for a while, this track is HEAVILY in progress, got a lot of work to do, but the main hook is there and the mix is sitting about right where i want it to atm, so u can get a fairly good idea of what i'm workin with..

feedback much appreciated!!!

http://soundcloud.com/guilttrip/untitled-108

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 1:05 am
by reignstep
reignz wrote:
step correct wrote:Yo, feedback.. give me it. :!:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/66043447c93c7940/
Awesome first drop, it pulled me right into the song. Also, your snare is remarkably good, clean song overall and nice drum use, it stuffs up the empty spots in your song.

New project I started with

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/275232

Some feedback wud be nice
Updated the song

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 11:03 pm
by drenster
antics wrote:Soundcloud

Wondering what you guys thing of this?! particularly in regards to the high pitched bleepy noise, cheers
i like it, i feel like you just have to bring everything out more, level it out, but its noice!

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 11:04 pm
by drenster
Another track im working on if anyone would like to give a listen and/or give some advice/critique. Thanks and peace

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2009 12:41 am
by xpc3u
I'm brand-spanking new to dubstep so I don't know what I'm doing. So far, I'm just experimenting in Fl Studio. I don't know FL Studio's potential so if you can refer me to tutorials to help me out, I'd appreciate it.

don't know what to do with this but here it is!
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2009 2:56 am
by step correct
reignz wrote:
step correct wrote:Yo, feedback.. give me it. :!:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/66043447c93c7940/
Awesome first drop, it pulled me right into the song. Also, your snare is remarkably good, clean song overall and nice drum use, it stuffs up the empty spots in your song.

New project I started with

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/275232

Some feedback wud be nice
8)

It's pretty cool. I like the (three?) different bass sounds you have going on in there. You might wants to break out with a few more sweeps or some drum rolls to help transition your change ups a little better. I sounds as though things are a tad abrupt. Good job though mang keep it up! (thanks for the positive feed back, I've waited two years to put a tune up here...) :P

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2009 7:54 am
by Rob Aeon
hey everyone
this in my 1st post
http://www.zshare.net/audio/661908174ef978ae/
thanks for any feedback in advance, im abit stuck what to do for an intro and about where to go next seeing its only 2 mins, i feel that the wobble might be getting repeative aswell, and im worried about my sub bass as im not really set up to monitor it properly. any suggestions, tips or comment would be great
cheers

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2009 10:46 pm
by phatman
hello friends

this is a work in progress.

more dubby. i dont know if it needs a wobble but it seems fine this way.
hope you give some feedback

cheers

substep.mp3 - 4.82MB

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2009 11:19 pm
by russ867
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8CLbZLsU8bw

Any feedback would be great... cheers

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2009 3:24 am
by bradicle
Hey guys, Just started this. Lets me know what ya think, And what I can improve on etc :). Open to whatever is thrown this way.

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2009 10:07 am
by antipode
Hey guys, Just started this. Lets me know what ya think, And what I can improve on etc :). Open to whatever is thrown this way.
Sounds like your kick is clashing with the sub. Might wanna hipass or just EQ it.

Or have you compressed the master? Things sound a bit wonky with the bass.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2009 9:21 pm
by bradicle
epochalypso wrote:
Hey guys, Just started this. Lets me know what ya think, And what I can improve on etc :). Open to whatever is thrown this way.
Sounds like your kick is clashing with the sub. Might wanna hipass or just EQ it.

Or have you compressed the master? Things sound a bit wonky with the bass.
Yea mate had mucked around with the master. Im just about to re upload and have a listen. Put master back to what it was at the start.
/edit. Just relistened and yea def see what you mean. Will have a play.

Ok I changed the bassline a bit. The bass notes were clashing with the kick, so i took them out. Updated tune.

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2009 9:25 pm
by horsie
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i started this track today and i would really appreciate some feedback .... any feedack is welcome .. thanks in advance

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 2:34 am
by bradicle
^ ^ ^

Just sounds like it has no flow. Chuck a synth in there, get some flow going on also. Just sounds like you've whacked them in there. You do have some nice sounds in it, just spend a bit more time and yea get some flow. That's my opinion though, I'm a real synthy person and put alot of them in my tracks.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 6:48 am
by step correct
bradicle wrote:
epochalypso wrote:
Hey guys, Just started this. Lets me know what ya think, And what I can improve on etc :). Open to whatever is thrown this way.
Sounds like your kick is clashing with the sub. Might wanna hipass or just EQ it.

Or have you compressed the master? Things sound a bit wonky with the bass.
Yea mate had mucked around with the master. Im just about to re upload and have a listen. Put master back to what it was at the start.
/edit. Just relistened and yea def see what you mean. Will have a play.

Ok I changed the bassline a bit. The bass notes were clashing with the kick, so i took them out. Updated tune.

Soundcloud
8) That's pretty impressive man. Super clean all around.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 6:53 am
by step correct
I cleaned mine up a tad. Not a huge difference but a few more sounds and some mastering.

Soundcloud

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 7:26 am
by dj.ik
Thinking of adding some pads/string/ synth atmos....what do you guys think?

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 9:37 am
by hashuz
Hey everyone! I've been working on a remix of Hetzjagd auf sizan by Atari Teenage Riot (aka Der Neunte Schuss) for a little while, appreciate any feedback you've got:
http://soundcloud.com/hashuz/

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 10:50 am
by Njamimars
My second DS, I think it's the better music I made so far.

It's messy I know but I always make things first then making a long nice intro and somethings between them.

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