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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 1:13 pm
by rob_del_terror
just put this together this mornin, slugstep:-

http://soundcloud.com/rob-del-terror/slugstep
would appreciate any feedback whatsoever before i continue with it.
cheers.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 2:03 pm
by Pendaz
Soundcloud


Levels still to be adjusted and a few tweaks, have a listen - feedback appreciated


-NumLoK

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 10:14 pm
by bradicle
step correct wrote:
bradicle wrote:
epochalypso wrote:
Hey guys, Just started this. Lets me know what ya think, And what I can improve on etc :). Open to whatever is thrown this way.
Soundcloud
8) That's pretty impressive man. Super clean all around.
Thx mate :). Any other feedback would be great thx.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 9:45 am
by dj2slo
This is just a little loop I started today, I thought it sounded cool.. Not really sure where im going with it though haha :?:

http://www.mediafire.com/file/zgdgdudnn10/9-29-09 Rough Draft 1.wav

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 7:42 pm
by bifta

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 7:41 am
by Risky_Business
this is my second dubstep tune. Ive had NO feedback yet, so if you could really take a second and tell me something i can do to make this track better.
thanks sooooo much in advance to anyone who replys. i WILL return the favor. just leave me with a link to your tune.

thanks
thanks
thanks

http://soundcloud.com/riskybusiness

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 7:42 am
by Risky_Business
how do you post your soundcloud songs in here , like have them embeded like that?

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 8:02 am
by Risky_Business
bradicle wrote:
step correct wrote:
bradicle wrote:
epochalypso wrote:
Hey guys, Just started this. Lets me know what ya think, And what I can improve on etc :). Open to whatever is thrown this way.
Soundcloud
8) That's pretty impressive man. Super clean all around.
Thx mate :). Any other feedback would be great thx.

nice tune. i like the mellow/dark ish mood. sounds a bit muddy on the low end. take some time to really eq and compress some more. its not a HUGEEE tune, but i really seem to like it. how long you been producing? what do you use?

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 8:07 am
by Risky_Business
Njamimars wrote:My second DS, I think it's the better music I made so far.

It's messy I know but I always make things first then making a long nice intro and somethings between them.

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Nice drum work. and good job on the hi lead. but that Hi sci fi sounding shit needs some eq on the hi end its hurtin my ears. but the wobble/bassy lead is blahh. its speed dosnt seem to match the song. i would scratch that all together and create a new one. something that grooves more with the tune

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 8:14 am
by Risky_Business
dj2slo wrote:This is just a little loop I started today, I thought it sounded cool.. Not really sure where im going with it though haha :?:

http://www.mediafire.com/file/zgdgdudnn10/9-29-09 Rough Draft 1.wav

im feeling the track, but it sounds like its clipping pretty bad. like you said its a rough draft. so put some work into that baby and lets see her again real soon

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 11:41 am
by daz-butane-1987
hi this is my on going track its a ruff version... im new fairly new to production and still getting the hang of it .... hope this link below works

Soundcloud

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 1:05 pm
by Death_Bastard
First shot at producing electronica, am a bassist really. Any feedback would be great.
This is by no means a dark or clubish track. Need to sort out the arp in the midsection break and the basses need tweaking, but main problem is structure. If anybody has advice on building tension/mood I'd love to hear it.
Soundcloud

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 3:12 pm
by marshy
*Moved to finished thread*

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 5:38 pm
by hirshi
drenster wrote:WATS UP everyone. Just workin on tracks as usual, any feedback would be appreciated if not, thanks for listening anyway. peace!

Soundcloud
FEEELIN this track. love the sample. makes me crack up. you got a finished version? 320 perhaps??

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 8:36 pm
by drenster
hirshi wrote:
drenster wrote:WATS UP everyone. Just workin on tracks as usual, any feedback would be appreciated if not, thanks for listening anyway. peace!

Soundcloud
FEEELIN this track. love the sample. makes me crack up. you got a finished version? 320 perhaps??
thanks alot man! finishing up two tracks and will gladly send you it when im done.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 10:54 pm
by bradicle
Risky_Business wrote:
nice tune. i like the mellow/dark ish mood. sounds a bit muddy on the low end. take some time to really eq and compress some more. its not a HUGEEE tune, but i really seem to like it. how long you been producing? what do you use?
Not very long at all. Use FL9. Yea it's basically had no eq work at all so will spend some time on that.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 11:02 pm
by midnight_toker
Soundcloud

Although I've been mixing dub tracks for a few years I never tried much production. This one came together in 20 minutes after a happy accident I had while working on another project.

Also have another version with a more traditional dubstep drum pattern, but having some ducking issues with that one. A bit of a cheesy vocal, and needs some frequency work on the mud to crisp it up... Go easy on me, not like I'm suggesting anyone should be playing this out anytime soon...

Check out my dubstep mixes @ http://hvyhttrs.podOmatic.com


DAW: FL9XXL

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 11:43 pm
by my_fickle_eye
daz-butane-1987 wrote:hi this is my on going track its a ruff version... im new fairly new to production and still getting the hang of it .... hope this link below works

Soundcloud
Hey think you should ditch the grit in the second chorusy cant hear any definition on the bass, maybe more variation with the vocal sample at the start, like add an automated delay or reverb maybe.

http://soundcloud.com/randeebugga/hvyhttrs-all-yer-bazz

Although I've been mixing dub tracks for a few years I never tried much production. This one came together in 20 minutes after a happy accident I had while working on another project.

Also have another version with a more traditional dubstep drum pattern, but having some ducking issues with that one. A bit of a cheesy vocal, and needs some frequency work on the mud to crisp it up... Go easy on me, not like I'm suggesting anyone should be playing this out anytime soon...

Check out my dubstep mixes @ http://hvyhttrs.podOmatic.com

Think the panning needs to be chilled out a bit, but could be just cause i got my phones in, yeah sounds clear and crispy, maybe some more variation with the apregi.




hirshi wrote:
drenster wrote:
WATS UP everyone. Just workin on tracks as usual, any feedback would be appreciated if not, thanks for listening anyway. peace!

http://soundcloud.com/drenone88/fake-your-own-death
FEEELIN this track. love the sample. makes me crack up. you got a finished version? 320 perhaps??


thanks alot man! finishing up two tracks and will gladly send you it when im done.

Sounds really together man the tones are sweat to listen to not sure maybe the wobble line needs to be a tab quieter but thats just real specific.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 11:45 pm
by aspect-dubz
Soundcloud

haven't upped a track in a while, so any feedback would be really REALLY appreciated, safe :)

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 11:46 pm
by my_fickle_eye
Hey working on putting an ep or something together and this is a sample from one of my tracks, just wondering if i could get some advice on general structuring, and especially EQ mixing and mastering problems with the sound ive got, thanks for your time.
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