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selophaine wrote:

dj_hottok wrote:this is my latest work which is still in progress let me know what ya'll think!

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?qymw5zndwjx

Liking this one, but djaccel is right, the build up is bigger than the drop. maybe some drum variation after the drop too. But all in all it's good imo.

thanks for the comments mates!
I listend to your advice and changed the drop!
This is the updated version: http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?qjmeqaytmwm

djaccel wrote:
Now here's my latest work in progress, got about 81 bars there, lemme know what you guys think.

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EDIT: Soundcloud doesn't seem to be working, so here's the track on speedyshare.

http://www.speedyshare.com/680980562.html

at about 1:22 i like how you switch up the bass with that nice high pitched siney thing on top, seems abit repetative. Feeling the snare in it and liking the bass's just reckon it needs a bit more ideas like a few more melodys?

generally feeling it though

nice one

Ok done my 3 feedbacks for today so http://www.dnbshare.com/download/xmanstep.mp3.html

hopefully this'll get some responses. Its a track ive made with a mate dont have a fucking clue what it is just went with the flow really on this one. Would like to see what people think

safee

gonna be puttin up some chilled stuff soon.

Been working on this ! please let me know what you think of it!
thanks in advance!

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djaccel wrote: Now here's my latest work in progress, got about 81 bars there, lemme know what you guys think.

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EDIT: Soundcloud doesn't seem to be working, so here's the track on speedyshare.

http://www.speedyshare.com/680980562.html

Jesus that bass is serious business..
would be well happy if i could come up with something like that..

i like the short/long decay on the snares, really works for me..

Loving the bad santa quote too btw

hey new tune, one of my heavier yet chiller tracks, check it out and feedback is greatly appreciated and will be reciprocated

safe!!

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marsonebeatz wrote:hey new tune, one of my heavier yet chiller tracks, check it out and feedback is greatly appreciated and will be reciprocated

safe!!

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Nice track mate, like the sorta reggae feel with the off beat nd sample feeling the bass sounds kinda weird but is interesting. The kick sounds very big and i loved the way for the drop it sorta melt into the bass

very nice

louissmusic wrote:

marsonebeatz wrote:hey new tune, one of my heavier yet chiller tracks, check it out and feedback is greatly appreciated and will be reciprocated

safe!!

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Nice track mate, like the sorta reggae feel with the off beat nd sample feeling the bass sounds kinda weird but is interesting. The kick sounds very big and i loved the way for the drop it sorta melt into the bass

very nice

safe mate!!! yeah this is only like my 5th dub track ive ever made. i just updated it with this "nows my selecta" sample in the middle before the break down. appreciate the feedback bruv!

lowpass wrote:

nitz wrote:

lowpass wrote:@Dj Accel - I like the bass noise, maybe throw some different percussion in there, like the voice sample too

Anyone else who wants feedback, leave some crit for mine first

This is my track, looking for some feedback on it before I play it out on Friday, I'd say it's more influenced by metal than anything else, I'm going with the melodic piano thing again with that sub underneath, much darker than other recent stuff though

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Easy lowpass, whats good man hows its going? i seen this on sound cloud and decided to try find it on DSF

I see your on the distance piano sound again!, you cant leave them along they are too good always have to be used !
nice track, good vibe to it, good use of delay and reverb and its even got a wobble in it ! Great variation into the 2nd drop.

crit= need one more element i think, not a full on riff, just something that play between certain bars, ie a sax stab..?
Other then one not really much to say... just maybe need one more element other then that its quite good. it should sound good when it played out, after everything is done

btw this is not your final mix down right?

Cheers man there was actually another mix that I uploaded which sounds a little cleaner but no not the final product, I can't stop using those pianos no lol nearly added an electric guitar too for the full distance rip-off haha. You're right there is an element missing which is why I came here, I just can't work it out. Maybe I could try a sax stab or something like you said in there see how it works.

@ Bradicle - mate that made me laugh, you're on about my crit for someone elses track, but yeah the sub was too overpowering, I've lowered it in recent mixes I've done of the track. I like your track mate, I think the rises are a little overdone, I think maybe either reduce them or just use a couple of different ones, deep track though.

Its ok at least it shows the ideas and the flow of the track at a reasonable standard. Yeh me too, i allways have used them on the go ready and waiting with just the best reverb and delay all in a comb ready to go!:D haha dont feel bad, i use a real acoustic strummed guitar noting wrong with it.. its placed in the back of the mix, it fits into the music and i think it sounds good, and if someone else dont then thats there problem not your Sax or a arp would do fine tho, but if you make a arp i would suggest placing deep into the mix give the song more dimension but if its the sax place up and close so you can actually hear the long delayed stab going farer farer..... farer..... farer...... abit like the tape delay

This thread moves so fast man, its already onto the next page !

http://soundcloud.com/louissmusic/daha reckon people wont be bothered to download my file so here it is on soundcloud.

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Just something I threw together last night, some ideas comments would be cool. Thanks.

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^^^ wonky special child of a tune

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Just something I threw together last night, some ideas comments would be cool. Thanks.

I can see what approach you are trying to take, and by no means am I an expert in the feel, but I'd beef the kick up as it feels drowned out in the current mix.

Personal preference but id also be less harsh on the chaining of the pad at the start of the bass.

Opinion of course,

On an additional note, something I started work on yesterday, I tend to work arse over tit about things so at the moment I havnt tied the intro in with the start of the bass (So theres that empty lull from the pad to bass), as I havnt fully decided how I want to go about that yet, but some general feedback and criticsm on the feel of the track so far would be appreciated.

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Very raw, just a couple ideas so far
Danke

ok here's something i've made on renoise thus far.

sort of, early 90s newage meets double-speed jungle'y dubstep chillout ??

sweet.mp3

lynn mc wrote:ok here's something i've made on renoise thus far.

sort of, early 90s newage meets double-speed jungle'y dubstep chillout ??

sweet.mp3

this is pimp!

I like the pads and ambient bits that are going on in this tune.

props

hi, guize!
what do ya think about this shitty tune?
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too slow that mate. dubstep is usually produced around 140bpm, this is around 100.

slightly repetitive aswell.

just VIP-ed my new tune! let me know what you think! ill return the favor! promise

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2marsonebeatz

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mainhead wrote:2marsonebeatz

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