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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 3:47 pm
by projekt
Cheers mate, taken on board

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 6:16 pm
by hypnotizm
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 11:56 pm
by triode
Ez!! guys, Got to say this one wicked forum i found this site the other day, seeing how im getting more in to making my own dubstep instead of breaks and oldskool hardcore- jungle and alittle dance cheese. i started the move to making dubstep a year ago or so...Anyhows so i thought id better go find some of my own kind. And found you lot so now ya stuck with me lol.!!.. i got a few of my tracks on youtube but more on sony acidplanet but only reg users can play the tracks from the site:(. if you guys have time please have a listen and give me some real honest feed back!! thanks hope to hear what you think !! ?
Heres the links
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rNiDjaOmNTc
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c7Vp0JguWf0
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JvFN2aRjtvk
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K0bq2TMFdLU
Acidplanet link >>
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?so ... 552&T=5004
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 12:23 am
by stappard
Listened to feeling dub, love the unconventional mass sounds and the percussion is awesome......but the kicks not there for so much of the track? Or at least its lost!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 12:32 am
by triode
Thanks

!! yeah the kick has gotton lost in the track so much going on no room left. im not working with the best of setups ..and not really mastered anything propley ive ever made

need help lol or money to pay someone or money for some new monitors and a studio course... thx

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 12:34 am
by stappard
triode wrote:Thanks

!! yeah the kick has gotton lost in the track so much going on no room left. im not working with the best of setups ..and not really mastered anything propley ive ever made

need help lol or money to pay someone or money for some new monitors and a studio course... thx

haha I know your pain, no monitors here either. good work getting such good sounds out a setup like that then.
if you get time to listen to a few of my tracks and hopefully feedback, soundcloud links in my sig

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 12:51 am
by triode
im useing Pa speakers 2 sets of 15's and a pair of eltax tall hifi speakers for my tops ..n yeah man listening now

will just played scanner and horror show ..that scanner track got me hooked in the 1st 8- 16 bars thats a wicked track .. and horror shows is well arranged proper !!it does what it says on the tin ..

)) wicked stuff !!

put me to shame lol ill go away now lol
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:17 am
by zonetrooper5
Just a song I'm working on, pretty much the second song I've made.
Soundcloud
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:22 am
by the-devo
vulvavibration wrote:
heavy one. like it. agree with the bass... could be deepah.
could i have a 320 when finished?

Hi,
I've replaced the FightClub sample with 6th sense movie quotes, which made it shorter, aand I did a minor change to the growling/dirty/phat/roar that keeps repeating.
I almost lost this song (thank you, Microsoft) but with enough luck, I could restore it and though I lost some important changes, I am happy to have the project file again.
Soundcloud
Send me a PM with your MSN address, and I'll add you, and then I can send you the 320.
It'd be an honor to know someone else has my track on his computer.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:57 am
by tripwire22
workin on new things soundcloud link in my sig ill offer feedback to anyone who says something
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 10:37 am
by stappard
tripwire22 wrote:workin on new things soundcloud link in my sig ill offer feedback to anyone who says something
Dude this isn't myspace, try a bit of generosity....
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 10:46 am
by ninteh
Ez fellas, new to the game.. feedback on this work in progress please :]
http://soundcloud.com/ninteh/tooonn-9
Soundcloud
cheers
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 1:35 pm
by joonipah
vulvavibration:
i like that tune, i don't really get the intro, it's different tho haha. but yeah it's a nice sound, got nice reverb and sounds really dark. beefy sub too.
triode:
i only listened to that feeling dub tune but i really like it! the beat's really nice and has a lot going on, it really works. i would maybe see what adding some reverb on the snare sounds like, not too much tho but a noticeable amount, ya nar.
i've been making a heavy dubsteppy/2-step tune with nintendo sounds, i've basically finished it, i just think there may be some changes that could be made and a bit of cleaning up. what do people think?
my favourite bit is the drop haha
Soundcloud
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 1:48 pm
by triode
Oh MATE !! MATE ! lol ..Now that is a Tune blinding wicked bassline proper !! lol can you come to my studio and live there for a year lmao i got a backlog of years of unfinished tracks that need tending to ..oh go on ..ill only lock you in for a year and post your dinner every evening in the latter box.... anyways ..WICKED!!!!!! Track
Thanks for having a listen to mine, will take your tip about the snare thx

see how it goes
how about bridging it passed mid way in to 4-4 beat and useing that bass with a not so diffrent but simular patten

other then that idea .but i think the tracks is fine !!

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:03 pm
by joonipah
triode wrote:Oh MATE !! MATE ! lol ..Now that is a Tune blinding wicked bassline proper !! lol can you come to my studio and live there for a year lmao i got a backlog of years of unfinished tracks that need tending to ..oh go on ..ill only lock you in for a year and post your dinner every evening in the latter box.... anyways ..WICKED!!!!!! Track
Thanks for having a listen to mine, will take your tip about the snare thx

see how it goes
how about bridging it passed mid way in to 4-4 beat and useing that bass with a not so diffrent but simular patten

other then that idea .but i think the tracks is fine !!

haha nice one, glad you like it! aye i was thinkin of doing that in one part, i'll give it a go sometime and repost if it sounds good like, cheers
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 6:36 pm
by stappard
100man wrote:
i've been making a heavy dubsteppy/2-step tune with nintendo sounds, i've basically finished it, i just think there may be some changes that could be made and a bit of cleaning up. what do people think?
my favourite bit is the drop haha
Soundcloud
Loving the sounds and the rhythm! Kick and bass sounds are spot on, my personal preference would be for a bit more crack in the snare to really get it bouncing but its sweet as it is. Cool sound design - love the little sub break bit at 1:45.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 6:58 pm
by joonipah
stappard wrote:100man wrote:
i've been making a heavy dubsteppy/2-step tune with nintendo sounds, i've basically finished it, i just think there may be some changes that could be made and a bit of cleaning up. what do people think?
my favourite bit is the drop haha
Soundcloud
Loving the sounds and the rhythm! Kick and bass sounds are spot on, my personal preference would be for a bit more crack in the snare to really get it bouncing but its sweet as it is. Cool sound design - love the little sub break bit at 1:45.
cool, yeah that snare needs a bit of eq. but aye cheers, the bass sounds are bits of gameboy sounds and samples from mario that i just fucked about with, and whacked a fat sub on, how's the sub sounding to you? i've not got proper monitors or anything
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 7:44 pm
by stappard
100man wrote:stappard wrote:100man wrote:
i've been making a heavy dubsteppy/2-step tune with nintendo sounds, i've basically finished it, i just think there may be some changes that could be made and a bit of cleaning up. what do people think?
my favourite bit is the drop haha
Soundcloud
Loving the sounds and the rhythm! Kick and bass sounds are spot on, my personal preference would be for a bit more crack in the snare to really get it bouncing but its sweet as it is. Cool sound design - love the little sub break bit at 1:45.
cool, yeah that snare needs a bit of eq. but aye cheers, the bass sounds are bits of gameboy sounds and samples from mario that i just fucked about with, and whacked a fat sub on, how's the sub sounding to you? i've not got proper monitors or anything
I'm listening through studio headphones, no monitors here either, and its sounding pretty banging, everything pulses along really well. Awesome track
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 8:27 pm
by amisane
vulvavibration wrote:got a new track.. still work in progress.. don't judge the changes from one part to the next. no effects, and the arrangement is half baked
i just came back from partying, so i will feedback later some tracks. right now i would talk just crap
my track:
Soundcloud
sub bass in the intro seems to fluctuate a bit in volume.
when the main drums first come in that sounds nice.
vocal sample has a good feel to it but i can't tell what it's saying - maybe this is the idea though?
squelchy 303 style bass/lead thing is ok, but is quite fast for my idea of dubstep. that's not to say it ain't right, but it's just my opinion... actually i think this is my least favourite part of the track.
drums get a bit wonky, maybe that's what you're after but for me it seems hard to groove to... i love grooving
at about 3:00 after the little breakdown when the drums are more pounding it sounds cool.
do you come from a house/acid/bassline background? tune seems to have that kind of vibe.
to be honest, i was getting a little bored towards the end... there's lots of changes, but... i dunno....
i think it's that 303ish lead sound, just doesn't sit right for me, and the tune feels like it's rushing a bit...
^^ this is just my opinion, everyone likes different music, and nothing I have just said is true. it's just feedback - take it with a fistful of salt!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 8:31 pm
by amisane
alexwright wrote:Hey everyone, I've just been tinkering around in FL this morning and come up with a little funky/liquid kinda influenced loop here. Feedback more than welcome
http://rapidshare.com/files/301363493/A ... s.mp3.html
Sorry I couldn't Soundcloud it, there was a problem with the link.
[]^_^[]
This sounds pro, really like the solid subs especially
biggup!