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The track on your myspace is heavy! Deep irie vibe! Totally feeln' it! The production sounds proper too! Any chance of a 320 of this BIG CHUNE????
Would love to play it at a party I am throwing next week!

if this is as you say a live tune, then it is very good and there is little i'd be able to find wrong with it. maybe the clap / snare samples themselves could be worked on a little bit.

lo-Fi dub is also awesome. In the case of that tune, I'd say some of the wobbles are too dry and could use some reverb.

small things, and all in all sounds like you've got a future in music production

song is fun and up beat for true. bass is lacking though and kinda repetitive. hi hats are nice and friendly. I'd like to see a few of the claps taken out, sometimes less is more my friend. also at 3:12 the drum sequencing is off just a bit in that drop. try resampling some bass notes in the simpler sampler in ableton and adding a 1 or 1.5 bar oscillation to it and you may like the result, a little more flavor but still not to wobbly. the leads are fun and happy, which I like. your mixdown isn't bad though, so give yourself some credit there. Peas and loave mayne.

earthling wrote:
if this is as you say a live tune, then it is very good and there is little i'd be able to find wrong with it. maybe the clap / snare samples themselves could be worked on a little bit.

lo-Fi dub is also awesome. In the case of that tune, I'd say some of the wobbles are too dry and could use some reverb.

small things, and all in all sounds like you've got a future in music production Very Happy
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The sound of the drum samples are pretty shitty. I didn't spend too much time on them. I just got sick of listening to this song and wanted to get it out there. I received some solid advice from some other ppl on this forum, saying when you are first starting out in production the most important thing to do is crank out as many tunes as possible. I didn't want to spend a bunch of time trying to perfect an underdeveloped track, which I often find myself doing.

Lo-Fi Dub is TOTATLY dry. I wanted to get some feedback from more experienced producers like yourself before I started adding reverb and delay ect... I have reworked that tune and will be posting it soon! Thank you so much for your response! Please feel free to pm with any of your tunes, and I will try to provide some honest and thoughtful feedback!

LHD

The drums are off a bit at 3:12, and I agree with all of your comments. I just wanted to get this tune finished, it is only the 3rd track that I have completed and each track seems to be getting slightly better. Thanks for the tip with simpler, I will defiantly have to try that out. (I love simpler, but I am still in the learning stages) I know the bass is not quite there. It is all sub, didn't layer it with any mid at all..... I've been having trouble laying my bass parts, and getting them to actually sound good. EQ'ing is still a new process for me.
I take your comments seriously, and I appreciate your time mate! Hope the next one will be better.
BIG UP for the thoughtful response

Dopeness!! 320 pleaseeeee!

thanks. . .

This track is pretty cool. Could I trouble you for the 320 please?

Check your pm box...

nice work man! loving the massive dub feel

WEED..............


Thanks for checking it out.

nice tunes!

YES!

Big vibes. Loving this jam.

Hook a brotha with a 320 plz!

re-working it right now....

Give you a much better, polished 320 in a day or two...

Just pm me brotha'.

Thanks for ckecking it out

I'll take a fresh 320 when its ready if thats alright!

For sure ...

Just PM me and remind me

Subject fresh 320 or something

sounds pretty good

definitely has some BIG summer sunny vibes

if this is only your 3rd tune you're going in the right direction man

irie vibes inside the ride

SAFE! ! !

Appreciated......

I R I E V I B E Z

for sure . . .

off the hook manye!