Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 5:06 pm
anyone out there?deadnoisesystem wrote:go on, give it a listen
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 7:45 pm
Sounds good mate, dark and ambient, wobbles weren't overpowering which i like... only thing I'd suggest is bring the drums up a bit in the mix.deadnoisesystem wrote:anyone out there?deadnoisesystem wrote:go on, give it a listen
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 7:47 pm
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 7:50 pm
sup dub bruddas. im working on this tracl now. its not even close to being done and everything is all over the place towsards the end, but i was just wondering if anyone was feeeeeeelin it. i think its nasty. and it has potential to rip it, just trying to figure out structure aznd trying to listen rather than look. BIG UP!
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 7:57 pm
thanks man, duly notedj-one wrote:Sounds good mate, dark and ambient, wobbles weren't overpowering which i like... only thing I'd suggest is bring the drums up a bit in the mix.deadnoisesystem wrote:anyone out there?deadnoisesystem wrote:go on, give it a listen
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 8:03 pm
^^ hey bruv im loving that lo-fi looped out jazz shit. im not feeling those few bass hits before the big bass comes in. overall the style is nasty and keep it up! what program are you using?>
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 8:17 pm
thanks bruv, werent sure about those eitherchristthetiger wrote:^^ hey bruv im loving that lo-fi looped out jazz shit. im not feeling those few bass hits before the big bass comes in. overall the style is nasty and keep it up! what program are you using?>
i use garageband and live 8
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 8:17 pm
thats very, very sick...christthetiger wrote:sup dub bruddas. im working on this tracl now. its not even close to being done and everything is all over the place towsards the end, but i was just wondering if anyone was feeeeeeelin it. i think its nasty. and it has potential to rip it, just trying to figure out structure aznd trying to listen rather than look. BIG UP!
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only thing id change (besides the outtro lol) is change the melody of the synth on the bassline, it sounds sick as it is, but a little variation every few beats will keep it interesting, otherwise it will get a bit repetetive over the entire track. that my opinion though
heres something ive started, im on the second drop and im pretty sure the kick is too quiet, let me know what you think
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 8:36 pm
sounds nice and minimal, yeah man id ramp up an 808 kick in there to give it a bit more bounceCollisionCourse wrote:thats very, very sick...christthetiger wrote:sup dub bruddas. im working on this tracl now. its not even close to being done and everything is all over the place towsards the end, but i was just wondering if anyone was feeeeeeelin it. i think its nasty. and it has potential to rip it, just trying to figure out structure aznd trying to listen rather than look. BIG UP!
Soundcloud
only thing id change (besides the outtro lol) is change the melody of the synth on the bassline, it sounds sick as it is, but a little variation every few beats will keep it interesting, otherwise it will get a bit repetetive over the entire track. that my opinion though
heres something ive started, im on the second drop and im pretty sure the kick is too quiet, let me know what you think
Soundcloud
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 10:31 pm
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 11:03 pm
nice mellow sounds and a laidback vibe, just missing a little bit of something to rip it updignan wrote:Soundcloud
could I get some feedback on this tune please? I'll return the favor don't worry ya'll!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 11:10 pm
Thanks, man!deadnoisesystem wrote:the-devo wrote:Hi,
Could someone give their opinion on this new track I'm working on?
It's nothing like I've ever done before; I always make dark/violent
stuff but this time I put myself to the test and made a happy tune by force.
The tempo is at around 100bpm which I don't like but that's the only way I could make it work with the vocals. eh..
My bandmate (the guy I work with on Naamah) likes its slowness and I'm also getting used to it, but please please give me some feedback!
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ps: this is a remix
man that is upfront. love the bass
I'm glad it eventually turned out well.Thanks bro! Yeah I was skeptical about the halfstep and 100bpm too, and you're right its mood is more hip-hop "flavored", but I think it still might be playable at dubstep parties.. amirite?j-one wrote: Nice work, I was skeptical a halfstep beat would work at 100bpm, but it sounds good... has more of a hip hop headnod kinda pace. Safe.
Thanks again!
Peace
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2009 12:01 am
thanks for listening man. i'm not really going for a crazy/filthy vibe on this tune, is that what you meant by 'rip it up'?deadnoisesystem wrote:nice mellow sounds and a laidback vibe, just missing a little bit of something to rip it updignan wrote:Soundcloud
could I get some feedback on this tune please? I'll return the favor don't worry ya'll!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2009 12:17 am
collision, that track is gangster, i kinda got lost at the second drop, and the kick is mad quiet. 
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2009 1:07 am
Okay, so here's a couple of WIP things I've been working on, try and get past the horrible mixing, until recently I was mixing in headphones... 
http://www.myspace.com/kochari
The only one thats really dubstep is "No Accident", let me know what you think!
EDIT: Argh, soundcloud won't let me play tunes (i have a REALLY bad PC atm) but i'm sure they're allbrilliant...
http://www.myspace.com/kochari
The only one thats really dubstep is "No Accident", let me know what you think!
EDIT: Argh, soundcloud won't let me play tunes (i have a REALLY bad PC atm) but i'm sure they're allbrilliant...
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2009 1:16 am
kinda, i mean its real nice, and im feeling that vibe, just needs a little kick up to drive the trackdignan wrote:thanks for listening man. i'm not really going for a crazy/filthy vibe on this tune, is that what you meant by 'rip it up'?deadnoisesystem wrote:nice mellow sounds and a laidback vibe, just missing a little bit of something to rip it updignan wrote:Soundcloud
could I get some feedback on this tune please? I'll return the favor don't worry ya'll!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2009 1:20 am
Gorgeous track man... really liked the second drop. Was going to suggest more sub to get the vibes really going, but it might just be these shitty headphones (on a laptop atm!).dignan wrote:Soundcloud
could I get some feedback on this tune please? I'll return the favor don't worry ya'll!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2009 1:28 am
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2009 1:30 am
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2009 1:36 am
Nice, really liking the understated menace hereCorkz wrote:Soundcloud
This is a short introduction to my next tune, let me know what you think so far.
This was inspired by Emalkay- When i look at you.
It's really quiet so make sure you turn your speakers up!
