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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 8:58 am
by z6z
cyberneticghost wrote:I've never posted my work in this thread, but there's a first time for everything, right? So here goes:

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ohyeah, very relaxing tune, i like it ! Pm me with 320 when u finish the track ? :wink:

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 11:36 am
by Anakinwasvader
Hai, still putting ideas into this, just trying to get it all down somewhere before I lose motivation to build it up.

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Every kind of feedback is appreciated. Danke.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 6:16 pm
by thesarge
Anakinwasvader wrote:Hai, still putting ideas into this, just trying to get it all down somewhere before I lose motivation to build it up.

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Every kind of feedback is appreciated. Danke.
Nice track, I like the drums, the bassline sounds kind of distant, I'm not sure if that's what you were going for, but either way..good track :)

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 6:54 pm
by thesarge
the sample is from mario 64. any feedback is greatly appreciated.

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 3:36 am
by dash b2009
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 10:24 am
by reignstep
thesarge wrote:the sample is from mario 64. any feedback is greatly appreciated.

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Deep track m8, I really like it.
I'd suggest you to EQ your kick drum, so it sounds lower, deeper, and doesn't have the annoying high pitched sound it in.

Overall I think you did a good job, nice wobs :)

WIP I'm on:
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Any feedback is appreciated ;)

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 5:09 pm
by soundboy
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just a very short clip i know :) but any feedback would be great

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 10:35 pm
by zonetrooper5
Heres my latest song which I need feedback on, I'm still not sure on my pick of vocals of this track and I think it needs some synths in it, just can't find the right one. If anyone does give me feedback then thanks. :)

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 11:02 pm
by jstick
Something I'm working on right now - need any sort of crit.. would be great!

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cheeers fellas

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 11:48 pm
by thesarge
@jstick

I like the second song alot, especially the synth part. I feel like you could bring in a different bass sound at 0:57, maybe something clean and subby.

EDIT: I just realized that song was in your sig, my bad. :lol: nice tracks anyways.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 1:28 am
by drakewho
I've revised this track a few times and could really use some critical feedback, I am new to production so anything helps.

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 7:58 am
by christthetiger
cyberneticghost wrote:I've never posted my work in this thread, but there's a first time for everything, right? So here goes:

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big tune bruv! i love the intro. the kicks could be a little harder.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 8:14 am
by djaccel
This track is pure hate. Wait for the bass at :55.

Leave feedback/comments and I'll do the same

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 3:33 pm
by rbnc
This is a mates tune, he wanted me to post it for feedback and some tips/pointers. I reckon it is sounding pretty good so far.

Hard to pinpoint what it sounds like, but It is 140, it has bass and it is chilled with a vocal sample. Just give it a whirl.

:w:

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 4:02 pm
by dozerrox
Any and all comments welcome. Really want to make this a banger!
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 5:12 pm
by jaydot
djaccel wrote:This track is pure hate. Wait for the bass at :55.

Leave feedback/comments and I'll do the same

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Dude I've been listening to your tracks on Sc quite a bit recently. Not heard this one yet but I'll give it a shot now :)

Anyway....here you go dudes. Does the bassline fit with this song and is it too ambient to be dubstep?:

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 5:39 pm
by tripwire22
new things up most work in prog plz feedback so i can finish

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 7:57 pm
by drakewho
djaccel wrote:This track is pure hate. Wait for the bass at :55.

Leave feedback/comments and I'll do the same

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Pretty dope little track here, my only advice is to make your wobble a little easier on the ears its got some high pitched distortion on it that to me at least is kinda rough on the ears especially if it were blasting in a club or something.

Hit me back with some feedback on my work in progress, please :).

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 8:09 pm
by drakewho
rbnc wrote:This is a mates tune, he wanted me to post it for feedback and some tips/pointers. I reckon it is sounding pretty good so far.

Hard to pinpoint what it sounds like, but It is 140, it has bass and it is chilled with a vocal sample. Just give it a whirl.

:w:

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I dig this track for sure way chilled out, I don't have much to say about it cause it's pretty good but maybe turning up the clap on the 3 a bit and EQing it to be more full, and I think to vocals are good but I liked it when the vocals would cut out for a bit and it would be just instrumental then they'd come back in for a bit so maybe make the vocals a tad bit more sparse. Overall your real close I think.

Hit me back with some feedback on my work in progress please :).

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 8:15 pm
by drakewho
dozerrox wrote:Any and all comments welcome. Really want to make this a banger!
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This track is pretty cool man I dig it, I don't have a whole lot to say its pretty awesome, all I would say is maybe EQ and mix/master stuff so every part of the track sticks out and sounds really crisp.

Hit me back with feedback on my work in progress please :).