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jam1 wrote:My first attempt at making a tune. Pretty simple stuff, all done in Reason 4. Let me know what you think please guys!

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Sounds alot like 50cent - wanksta

bifta wrote:

jam1 wrote:My first attempt at making a tune. Pretty simple stuff, all done in Reason 4. Let me know what you think please guys!

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Sounds alot like 50cent - wanksta

After listening to said tune on Youtube (I can gladly say I've never heard it before), I see where you're coming from!

I'll get my coat....

Hi

Here is a track that is 'finished' but its virtually unmixed and unmastered. I would love
some tips before I do.

thanks
Pyro

www.soundcloud.com/lordpyro - the track is called the cookbook!

lordpyro wrote:Hi

Here is a track that is 'finished' but its virtually unmixed and unmastered. I would love
some tips before I do.

thanks
Pyro

http://www.soundcloud.com/lordpyro - the track is called the cookbook!

sweet, nice and dark
try automating your bass lfos to switch up the tune

bifta wrote:Soundcloud

your synth sound is a bit hard on the ears but the beat is nice

drenster wrote:Hey a track i would like you to listen to before i finish it up. let me know what you think anything is appreciated. thanks and peace!

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nice gangsta rap vibe, sound could be thickened up a bit

Here's the latest. More of a Loefah/Digital Mystikz sound this time. Long tune too, 9:32!

Post some feedback and comments and I'll gladly return the favor.

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@djaccel - Good laid back vibes, and the mix sounds pretty good to me. However, don't DJs prefer shorter songs, like 3-5 min? I suggest you cut yours up and just keep your favorite parts to shorten it up, like maybe cut out half of each verse--I just did that to my current song that was 6 mins with lots of variation, I shortened it to 4 and it sounds more focused.

@lordpyro - i think it could be punchier, like maybe make the snare more central

Would like to know what you guys think the song in my sig... I'm just mixing with headphones so i dunno if i got the sub right

Pitchdownplease wrote:Always time for a first post, only recently started producing, would just like some feedback on my first project

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Just thought Id look for final feedback on this before moving it over to the finished section.

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Im unsure to wether the bass is sitting and thinking of overhauling it.

bifta wrote:

jam1 wrote:My first attempt at making a tune. Pretty simple stuff, all done in Reason 4. Let me know what you think please guys!

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Sounds alot like 50cent - wanksta

LOL

djaccel wrote:Here's the latest. More of a Loefah/Digital Mystikz sound this time. Long tune too, 9:32!

Post some feedback and comments and I'll gladly return the favor.

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+Nice Mixdown
+Nice vibe, sounds exactly like the style you were going for

-Doesn't need to be that long. Could cut out half of each section and not lose anything.

djaccel wrote:Here's the latest. More of a Loefah/Digital Mystikz sound this time. Long tune too, 9:32!

Post some feedback and comments and I'll gladly return the favor.

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sweet track, everything sits nice, just edit it down man

djaccel wrote:Here's the latest. More of a Loefah/Digital Mystikz sound this time. Long tune too, 9:32!

Post some feedback and comments and I'll gladly return the favor.

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agree with everyone on that its a great track def sounds like DMZ but its long as hell

First remix I've done rough 1st draft

[sounndcloud]http://soundcloud.com/jaydot/delerium-s ... step-remix[/soundcloud]

let me know your thoughts.


J.

rapsag111 wrote:@djaccel - Good laid back vibes, and the mix sounds pretty good to me. However, don't DJs prefer shorter songs, like 3-5 min? I suggest you cut yours up and just keep your favorite parts to shorten it up, like maybe cut out half of each verse--I just did that to my current song that was 6 mins with lots of variation, I shortened it to 4 and it sounds more focused.

ketamine wrote: +Nice Mixdown
+Nice vibe, sounds exactly like the style you were going for

-Doesn't need to be that long. Could cut out half of each section and not lose anything.

deadnoisesystem wrote: sweet track, everything sits nice, just edit it down man

tripwire22 wrote:
agree with everyone on that its a great track def sounds like DMZ but its long as hell

Thanks for the feedback guys, just cut it down a bit, here's the slimmed up version!

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EDIT: Just click the link, soundcloud's fucked.

new track in signature!
see what you think..

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please critique this!!! any input much appreciated!!!

jaydot wrote:First remix I've done rough 1st draft

[sounndcloud]http://soundcloud.com/jaydot/delerium-s ... step-remix[/soundcloud]

let me know your thoughts.


J.

nice sample, sound is very thin, needs beefing up quite considerably, the beats first then drop another sub under the bass

icebagg wrote:Soundcloud

please critique this!!! any input much appreciated!!!

Bassline loosely sounds like Chase n Stay's running.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Smm93h254OY
Could just be my ears and lack of sleep however

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Chinese influenced dubsteo/grime track... DROP FEEDBACK... AS USUAL I WILL RETURN IT!!!