Need to figure out how to sub bass proeperly but here's a remix I did, only my 2nd full track. Hit me up on some feedback.
Nice one.
J.
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Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 11:06 pm
by mashmash
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hey, i'm looking for some feedback as this is my first tune that i am actually going to take seriously and try to finish so any feedback is appreciated
Need to figure out how to sub bass proeperly but here's a remix I did, only my 2nd full track. Hit me up on some feedback.
Nice one.
J.
Nice, I like the minimal drums, the sub is sounding lovely and warm feels like i've just stepped out of the shower!
However, to my ears, the wobble sounds thin and kind of garish, but then i don't like wobble that much anyway so what do i know? i would make it less busy, keep the track simple and chilled you know.
Mixed in headphones (its 3.30am here) so probably sounds rubbish. chucked in a massive wobble at the end cuz i was bored.
Would love feedback, the past few tracks i put up had none at all
much love
Mixed in headphones (its 3.30am here) so probably sounds rubbish. chucked in a massive wobble at the end cuz i was bored.
Would love feedback, the past few tracks i put up had none at all
much love
is nice, id bring in that wobble much sooner
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 4:22 pm
by tripwire22
short little thing i finished this morning well its short though
Mixed in headphones (its 3.30am here) so probably sounds rubbish. chucked in a massive wobble at the end cuz i was bored.
Would love feedback, the past few tracks i put up had none at all
much love
is nice, id bring in that wobble much sooner
Really? I was thinking about scrapping the wobble and outting it in another tune, it just sounds really out of place i think.
@tripwire: its nice man. how do you go about writing those pad patterns/bleeps? i've always wanted to make something chilled like that but i struggle getting further then a few nice chords...
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 2:42 am
by IanMassoth
This is the wrong place but can someone point me in the direction of where I can learn to make the Yooo, or bwaaa, sound a lot dubstep tunes are using? Such as trolley snatcha's the future it bwahs before every wobble
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 3:46 am
by Big MD
this is the actual stadium of the thing which i need help in!
this is a track i did a while back, im not finished with the bassline but you get the idea..
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 9:58 am
by djaccel
IanMassoth wrote:This is the wrong place but can someone point me in the direction of where I can learn to make the Yooo, or bwaaa, sound a lot dubstep tunes are using? Such as trolley snatcha's the future it bwahs before every wobble
It's FM synthesis.
Got the latest tune in my sig, check it out and leave some feedback!
Really stuck on a remix im doing of borgore - guided relaxation dub. I dont know were to go with it. Youtube in my sig!
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 4:46 pm
by FMX
B-90 wrote:Really stuck on a remix im doing of borgore - guided relaxation dub. I dont know were to go with it. Youtube in my sig!
I think you need to drop out the melody for a bit and have sum striking snare and hats?... then bring in some kind of hook/melody/riff... because just now it feels like its not going anywhere and just floating around the middle. You know what i mean? But i do like the feel.. BIG difference from the original! thats for sure.
feels like i've just stepped out of the shower!
i would make it less busy, keep the track simple and chilled you know.
, don't really know what to make of it, it's not finished yet