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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 9:32 pm
by Pitchdownplease
To go on my previous post, I've been working on this a bit more and gone with a suggested stabby kind of bass, its very raw but let me know how it is.
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 9:42 pm
by Geeza
Pitchdownplease wrote:To go on my previous post, I've been working on this a bit more and gone with a suggested stabby kind of bass, its very raw but let me know how it is.
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sounds okay I personally dont like the static kinda noise but thats just personal preferance not a dig on the production.
I like the life support kinda blip and the bass is nice too will look out for the finished product

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 9:44 pm
by Pitchdownplease
Haha, that was an error in the mix, I had one of the filter channels turned off when I saved, by accident, if you re-listen to the one In the edited post, that should be better

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 9:45 pm
by Geeza
junior spesh wrote:Soundcloud
Dont watch the vocal, just my instrumental, PURE VIOLIN MADNESS TBH
drop feedback..
Mucky mucky mucky the violins are alott love this so far smashed it
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 10:50 pm
by dreadheaded
this is our first one in cubase, its coming along pretty well, but im starting to feel a bit out of ideas for it
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edit: just realised, we havent even put in a proper sub yet there is still lots to do
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 11:02 pm
by dddemain
dreadheaded wrote:this is our first one in cubase, its coming along pretty well, but im starting to feel a bit out of ideas for it
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That's sounding sick. Really liking the pad, and that bass is awesome, didn't even notice the lack of sub lol.Got nothing to say levels/production wise, (as it's fucking good,) but maybe the melody that comes in at 1.50 could do with a few more notes per bar - although it might take away from the minimalist vibe. Absolutely awesome for first Cubase project. what did you use before and why the change?
This is my latest effort: Some ambient shizz, definately not finished - the breaks need a bit some work and I think the melody needs a bit of a change up after the key change but there we are..
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Any comments/crit would really be appreciated
Cheers
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 11:13 pm
by dreadheaded
junior spesh wrote:Soundcloud
Dont watch the vocal, just my instrumental, PURE VIOLIN MADNESS TBH
drop feedback..
Im feeling this one, got a really nice feel to it,
LTUK wrote:
This is my latest effort: Some ambient shizz, definately not finished - the breaks need a bit some work and I think the melody needs a bit of a change up after the key change but there we are..
Soundcloud
Any comments/crit would really be appreciated
Cheers
Im really liking this one, specially that piano, you could do with more fx and stuff going on, like random little percussion hits with delay on, and random oneshots and stuff, (i still have to add some to mine aswell), but its sounding well good, and nice and clean too
edit: oh and thanks for the comments,
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 11:17 pm
by Wabberjocky
@LTUK I like the piano, adds a nice touch and really goes well with the groove. I think you need to add bits and pieces for sure, like if I was given that track I'd go to the turntables and scratch some vocals or such over it, just layer in general, definitely sounds like its missing elements. Good start though!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 11:30 pm
by lp
LTUK wrote:dreadheaded wrote:this is our first one in cubase, its coming along pretty well, but im starting to feel a bit out of ideas for it
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That's sounding sick. Really liking the pad, and that bass is awesome, didn't even notice the lack of sub lol.Got nothing to say levels/production wise, (as it's fucking good,) but maybe the melody that comes in at 1.50 could do with a few more notes per bar - although it might take away from the minimalist vibe. Absolutely awesome for first Cubase project. what did you use before and why the change?
We were using Reason 4 but have come to realise its limitations quite quickly, cheers for the feedback. Suprised how quickly its come together after gettin my head round cubase (still am really)
LTUK wrote:This is my latest effort: Some ambient shizz, definately not finished - the breaks need a bit some work and I think the melody needs a bit of a change up after the key change but there we are..
Soundcloud
Any comments/crit would really be appreciated
Cheers
Feeling the piano as you said does get a tad repetative so a change up would work well. Percussion and drums are really nice and clean. Im feeling the 2nd drop too picks u up. Don't go overboard on adding more breaks maybe just a touch here n there should fill up the tune nicley. Nice start for sure, what you using out of intrest?
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 11:40 pm
by jaydot
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Chilled out beat here for you guys. Gonna expand on it.
J.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 11:50 pm
by jaydot
dreadheaded wrote:this is our first one in cubase, its coming along pretty well, but im starting to feel a bit out of ideas for it
Soundcloud
edit: just realised, we havent even put in a proper sub yet there is still lots to do
Two thumbs up dude.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 12:42 am
by Pitchdownplease
Eh, another update, took this in a different direction that it originally was, more ambient than anything but I feel it fits, ill edit my other posts to reduce spam, but let me know what you think. Thanks
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Apologies again for the spam, but I like to get something up when I have a brakethrough

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 10:04 am
by dreadheaded
Pitchdownplease wrote:Eh, another update, took this in a different direction that it originally was, more ambient than anything but I feel it fits, ill edit my other posts to reduce spam, but let me know what you think. Thanks
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Apologies again for the spam, but I like to get something up when I have a brakethrough

i prefer where the bleep was before, playing on the offbeat
also im not sure about the bass sound, i think its a bit too distorted for my liking
oh and a piece of friendly advice, give feedback on other ppls tracks, they will be more willing to give you feedback on yours

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 10:04 am
by dreadheaded
EDIT: sorry double post
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 4:19 pm
by jaydot
Soundcloud Hit me back fellas. In my opinon my best tune I've produced.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 4:43 pm
by critical sound system
junior spesh wrote:Soundcloud
Dont watch the vocal, just my instrumental, PURE VIOLIN MADNESS TBH
drop feedback..
nice tune the vocal is nice aswell.
any chance of a 320 when finished?
Pitchdownplease wrote:To go on my previous post, I've been working on this a bit more and gone with a suggested stabby kind of bass, its very raw but let me know how it is.
Soundcloud
nice effort.the synth needs some processing but i personaly like it.some variations and the tune should be ok.
for myself i have some tunes in progress.
i struggle very hard with the kick and the bass.
check the soundcloud
http://soundcloud.com/critical-dubz
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 4:50 pm
by marshy
Alright guys, haven't posted in here in ages. Currently lying on my bed laying down a drum pattern with i-pod headphones which only work in one ear. All my music stuff is in my uni accommodation, but can't go any longer without making something ha.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/711600530365f384/
Sorry about zshare, as it's only a REAL basic drop and pattern there's no point uploading it to soundcloud. Also as i mentioned my headphones, the levels are likely disgusting.
Main focus is on the hihat element, do you think it works? Very jumpy and not my usual way of doing things.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 5:04 pm
by CollisionCourse
HAISUP
this is wot ive been working on have a listen ploys!
http://soundcloud.com/jcollision/real-talk
feedback etc
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 5:29 pm
by syrup
i´d let the hi-hats join a little earlier (4 bars earlier i think...?) cca at 2:06, it´d give it more rhytmic feeling imo
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 6:49 pm
by bengreen
Updated my prev one
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Crit please lads
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