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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 4:56 pm
by mikey1985
Liked it alot mate, nice fresh sounding drums, maybe turn the snare down a bit.
I think that there is one synth part in the bassline which sounds a bit cheesy, its the fast descending arpeggio type bit, could be a bit more gritty and raw sounding.
Im feeling those sweeps before the drop but i think they would be better a bit more subtle in the mix or it could sound a bit trancey. I really like the 'raindroppy' ambience at the start, gives the tune a good atmosphere.
Nice work on automating the LFOs, I like the variety in the bassline alot.
All i all its sounding good mate, very nice.
Drop me some feedback on my tune if you get the time.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 5:29 pm
by dddemain
mikey1985 wrote:Let me know what you think, same old excuses, not mastered, mix is crap, not finished structure, you know the drill!
If anyone thinks theyd like a crack at mixing this I can send the stems and return the favor with one of there tunes, or atleast have a go anyway!
http://www.zshare.net/audio/71289105394ed763/
Tunes called CrispyNoodle at the moment
Apart from the snares being too quiet, its sounding pretty good mix wise (to my ears anyway.) The crash's sound a bit dry so maybe some reverb would sort that out. As you've mentioned the structure is a bit weak: If it was my tune I'd have it drop all growly for 8 bars and then come in with the high variations etc. All that aside it sounds really good - a pleasure to listen to. You've created very nice ambience throughout. The kicks are nice and strong and the sub bass is pretty epic, and the wobbles are interesting and inventive with more than enough variation to keep me listening. Would love a copy when you're done...
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 5:37 pm
by masm
icebagg wrote:Got a new one for you, my project at the moment criticism appreciated ! let me know whats good!
Soundcloud
yo man this track is brutalllllll....
what you use to make a wobble
??
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 5:39 pm
by mikey1985
LTUK wrote:mikey1985 wrote:Let me know what you think, same old excuses, not mastered, mix is crap, not finished structure, you know the drill!
If anyone thinks theyd like a crack at mixing this I can send the stems and return the favor with one of there tunes, or atleast have a go anyway!
http://www.zshare.net/audio/71289105394ed763/
Tunes called CrispyNoodle at the moment
Apart from the snares being too quiet, its sounding pretty good mix wise (to my ears anyway.) The crash's sound a bit dry so maybe some reverb would sort that out. As you've mentioned the structure is a bit weak: If it was my tune I'd have it drop all growly for 8 bars and then come in with the high variations etc. All that aside it sounds really good - a pleasure to listen to. You've created very nice ambience throughout. The kicks are nice and strong and the sub bass is pretty epic, and the wobbles are interesting and inventive with more than enough variation to keep me listening. Would love a copy when you're done...
Nice one for your advice, ill be making those changes right about now.
You know you posted your tune after your feedback, well how do i give feedback on that, just here in a quote? Or is there some sort of rule people tedn to follow where i comment it seperately? Sorry im new to this forum thing and im not sure what im doing!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 5:48 pm
by dddemain
Well the one under what I wrote appears under everything I write its a "signature." (You can change your sig in the user control panel btw.) I don't think there are any rules as to how to give feedback, but quoteings always nice... I'll have something up for feedback a bit later today
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 5:50 pm
by graftek
Nothing really special. Just having fun making a woble track.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/7129167112486ebc/
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 8:01 pm
by mikey1985
That sounds evil!! I like it alot!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 9:10 pm
by deadnoisesystem
masm wrote:icebagg wrote:Got a new one for you, my project at the moment criticism appreciated ! let me know whats good!
Soundcloud
yo man this track is brutalllllll....
what you use to make a wobble
??
man thats naughty
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 10:05 pm
by jaydot
Ah I wish I had the Net at home. :s Can't produce or listen to any tracks.
new dub plate
Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 11:00 pm
by moogmonky
Soundcloud
i would like to hear some constructive feedback on my track
thanx
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 11:16 pm
by reignstep
mikey1985 wrote:
Liked it alot mate, nice fresh sounding drums, maybe turn the snare down a bit.
I think that there is one synth part in the bassline which sounds a bit cheesy, its the fast descending arpeggio type bit, could be a bit more gritty and raw sounding.
Im feeling those sweeps before the drop but i think they would be better a bit more subtle in the mix or it could sound a bit trancey. I really like the 'raindroppy' ambience at the start, gives the tune a good atmosphere.
Nice work on automating the LFOs, I like the variety in the bassline alot.
All i all its sounding good mate, very nice.
Drop me some feedback on my tune if you get the time.
Checked out your tune, still needs a lot of mastering as you said yourself. Drums need proper EQ'ing aswell, try adding some 1k Hz range boost on your snare, and about a tad of 100Hz range boost on your kick, it often does the trick with me.
Also, add a solid sub in some of your bass parts, it'll give your bass aswell as your whole track a nice power boost imo
It's a good start, though you still got some work ahead of you
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 2:00 am
by djaccel
Re-worked the drums on this one, HEAVY SHIT
Soundcloud
Lemme know what you guys think
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 6:21 am
by tripwire22
Soundcloud
i was playing Final Fantasy 7 and just got to the part where u take Aerith home and i had to go make a song it doesnt really sound like final fantasy but idk
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 12:57 pm
by orialairo
Soundcloud
Some feedback on this would be really great(especially on the sounds and mix), will return favour.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 1:51 pm
by junior spesh
Soundcloud
WOI!!!!!! Send me feeedback baby.... i ALWAYS return it...
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 1:51 pm
by junior spesh
Soundcloud
WOI!!!!!! Send me feeedback baby.... i ALWAYS return it...
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 2:13 pm
by si-anmc
Kinda new to this site. I have a track i'm working on and wondered what people thought of it before i finished it. I'm not so hot on the whole production jargon so keeping replies simple would help
thanks in advance
Soundcloud
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 2:14 pm
by si-anmc
Kinda new to this site. I have a track i'm working on and wondered what people thought of it before i finished it. I'm not so hot on the whole production jargon so keeping replies simple would help
thanks in advance
Soundcloud
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 2:24 pm
by graftek
junior spesh wrote:Soundcloud
WOI!!!!!! Send me feeedback baby.... i ALWAYS return it...
I really like the weird basline. Not sure about the strings in the back. I think that if you shuffle around with the drums and creating little pauses etc could be a nice touch.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 2:38 pm
by graftek
orialairo wrote:Soundcloud
Some feedback on this would be really great(especially on the sounds and mix), will return favour.
The intro part (from 0:00 - 1:50) has a very nice ambiance (melodie and sound wise). Like that allot! But the woble in the part afther that sounds a bit thin and uninteresting. I think you could easily layer it with another one. Coming to the pitchbends, one part sounds a bit out of tempo here. Last but not least I think the track lacks bass in general.