Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 6:42 pm
updated this after a weekend of failing to get anything else done.
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 8:38 pm
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 10:29 pm
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 10:30 pm
you guys never learn, eh?! 
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 2:17 am
You tell 'em, mate.vulvavibration wrote:you guys never learn, eh?!
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:05 am
yo mars this track is sick, tight production and a mean drop,mars wrote:Hey Everyone!
I've been working on this for a bit, please let me know what you think!
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cheers and respect! i'll try to give some good feedback here too!
-m4rs
would love a copy of the finished tune
much love
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:09 am
good work mate, tight production, the only thing id suggest is its very straight rhythmically, maybe try and quantise a little swing into it
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:11 am
that will be one sick drop when your doneAstral wrote:updated this after a weekend of failing to get anything else done.
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:11 pm
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 5:41 pm
i like that alot
sample is huge
only thing id change is have a little variation on drums and the snare needs bringing up a bit i think.
still big though
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Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 6:03 pm
I have no idea about the keys, can not they better?
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 6:37 pm
Thanks man! That's what I was thinking... especially since the "second chorus" still is the exact same 32 bars over again.deadnoisesystem wrote:that is sick, love that twisted piano melody, production is nice an clean tooAbstrym wrote:Soundcloud
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just need a little more variation and a mastering and youll be sweet
Really nice atmosphere going on here! Lots of reverb but it comes across nicely... the drums are a bit glitchy at the end of the segment (1:24, 2:20 and so on), but other than that I don't know what I'd improve, actually. Except; get it mastered, man.
Haha, thanks! Nice idea, may try how that sounds. But do you really think the snare needs more power? It's already processed like fuck and sounds fine (except for some EQing) to me...mars wrote:omg that's a dooooooooooope idea!Abstrym wrote:Soundcloud
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here's what u could do... as ur about to drop the synth, stop the piano and put 4 bars of buildup. us some sort of sweep or get a synth to glide upwards... then drop the BIG synth with the drums, but layer them with more snares and eq them (don't just use one snare sample, use 2-3, until u have a nice snare going). then, after playing the synth melody for a bit, re-introduce the piano on top of the synth.
this could be nice and dirty with a couple more hours of work!
cheers!
Fat! Feels like the drums are missing something, though... maybe add some more SFX and cymbals
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Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 7:03 pm
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 10:38 pm
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Hi, Im Maddoc.
Im pretty new to producing music and even more new to this forum. I'd like to introduce myself with this
little piece of music which I hope you enjoy. Constructive criticism is what im up for.
Thanks.
Hi, Im Maddoc.
Im pretty new to producing music and even more new to this forum. I'd like to introduce myself with this
little piece of music which I hope you enjoy. Constructive criticism is what im up for.
Thanks.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 11:58 pm
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 12:20 am
@abstrym, cheers mate, needs a bit of tidying i know
@ jaydot, the production is tight mate,
@ jaydot, the production is tight mate,
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 1:05 am
Good effort for starting up. You seem to have a good understanding of your beat programming, alot better than I did when I started out anyway. Now for the constructive part, Id give that clubby kick at the start some treatment it's very..."Whomph Whomph" bit of a tail, ya know, but you could be going for that so by all means, and possibly give the bass/vocals a bit more room to breathe in the later part.
Tune jay, different. Im a little curious what that pass is peaking at from 1m onwards?
the stereo seperation on it feels nice, not to sure about the random laser sounds every now and then.Loving the drums, real quality and effort put into those, and it shows, very nice.mars wrote:Hey Everyone!
I've been working on this for a bit, please let me know what you think!
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cheers and respect! i'll try to give some good feedback here too!
-m4rs
Now a favor for me, I've been banging my head against this tune all weekend trying to get something that fits rolling. I've uploaded 3 versions, each with different changes.
http://soundcloud.com/astraldubstep
Wips 1,2 and 3 Being the last, Looking for feedback on which of these people are feeling.
3 Being the latest upload.
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 2:05 am
Edit: going to re upload my track later ignore this for now
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Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 8:44 am
Will comment on the waveform too, but nice intro, relaxing bass, would do well in a chillout mix,deadly habit wrote:Soundcloud