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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 2:35 pm
by DubNemesis
Astral wrote:Worked on this a little bit more, alt tabbing from my uni work to the daw and failing at education.

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Verbs probably to strong in places, as is the volume of the wobbleh.
Liking this a lot man. You're right about the wobble being a bit loud in places, easy fix though :D I think it'll be sick when its a bit further down the line.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 6:38 pm
by hexade
Hey! New tune i started working on the other day, still needs quite a bit of work though
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 8:35 pm
by junior spesh
hexade wrote:Hey! New tune i started working on the other day, still needs quite a bit of work though
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Has deffo potential.. and i apologise in advance the shitty feedback but im in a rush (im cum back and critique properly later!)

Anyway, check this tune... "Synthol" Soundcloud

SUM SEXY SYNTHS INNA DIS TUNE!!!

LET ME KNOW WHAT U THINK!

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 8:53 pm
by hexade
ah thanks man :) Im glad to get noticed at all haha, be it good or bad feedback :P

And nice one that you got there! Im liking it! :D

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 1:20 am
by deadnoisesystem
junior spesh wrote:
hexade wrote:Hey! New tune i started working on the other day, still needs quite a bit of work though
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Has deffo potential.. and i apologise in advance the shitty feedback but im in a rush (im cum back and critique properly later!)

Anyway, check this tune... "Synthol" Soundcloud

SUM SEXY SYNTHS INNA DIS TUNE!!!

LET ME KNOW WHAT U THINK!
spesh thats sick, and hexade good start mate, chop it about a bit an youll have a banger

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 1:21 am
by deadnoisesystem
chicken wrote:check out my sound acound
yeah mate thats naughty

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 1:23 am
by deadnoisesystem
zonetrooper5 wrote:Got a new wip track up, need some feedback to make it better and eventually finish it.

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thats a good start mate, needs bass sooner and a bit of eqing, but its sounding good

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 1:25 am
by deadnoisesystem
DubNemesis wrote:Updated version, Wobble still needs a bit of tidying in some places and it needs filling out a bit, but you get the idea where its going now. The second drop is basically the same as the first at the mo, plan to change it. Let me know what you think..

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nemesis this tune is a a beast

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 2:41 am
by Karoshi
kk, i posted this in a seperate thread, which i now know was wrong :)

just after a couple of pointers really.. been looking over a few forums and few seem to have as big of a production section as this site so i thought i would give here a go.

i have only uploaded a couple of songs onto my Soundcloud, an old one that sort of counts as dubstep and a new one that is abit of drum and bass.
I can't help but think that they sound 'corny', like all the different parts sound placed over each other instead of mixed together if you know what i mean.
I try not to use presets as i feel like its cheating, maybe thats my problem haha

i have only been seriously giving this production stuff a propper go for the last 6 or so months, but i dont feel as though i am progressing :evil:

well, if anyone has any feedback (not on the actual tracks, but how to make them sound more whole) it would be appreciated.

Thanks

Nick.

P.S. sorry if its in the wrong section

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 3:52 am
by zonetrooper5
deadnoisesystem wrote:
zonetrooper5 wrote:Got a new wip track up, need some feedback to make it better and eventually finish it.

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thats a good start mate, needs bass sooner and a bit of eqing, but its sounding good
Thanks man, reworked it some more, made the bassline better, the sub-bass comes in earlier. I'll check my song again on my monitors so I can EQ it properly.

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Do you have any tracks which need some feedback on? :)

Re: WU-TANG!!! CLAN BANGAH!!

Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 4:29 am
by soulshynchyld
continuumdnb wrote:
soulshynchyld wrote:well this is the first movie ive chopped up into samples, went quite well i reckon!!

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if ya dont check tha track your a dick!!HAHHAHHAAH

have a look ya, nooo way ya will regret it!! NZ repn it hard!!CHE
This is a promising start. Do you have to write in rainbow colours and use that many exclamation marks though?
ummmmm yup!!! i sure do
why...whats wrong with that???
keep ya mind on the music bro!!che

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 4:51 am
by Astral
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My first attempt at any form of vocal >.<.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 11:42 am
by deadnoisesystem
zonetrooper5 wrote:
deadnoisesystem wrote:
zonetrooper5 wrote:Got a new wip track up, need some feedback to make it better and eventually finish it.

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thats a good start mate, needs bass sooner and a bit of eqing, but its sounding good
Thanks man, reworked it some more, made the bassline better, the sub-bass comes in earlier. I'll check my song again on my monitors so I can EQ it properly.

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Do you have any tracks which need some feedback on? :)
yeah zone, thats better already, at 1.30ish when the wobble comes in, try adjusting the volume envelope so it swells rather than drops and that will sound naughty
i got a few tunes on the go, none ready to render and send yet, but thanks anyways

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 12:16 pm
by DubNemesis
deadnoisesystem wrote:
DubNemesis wrote:Updated version, Wobble still needs a bit of tidying in some places and it needs filling out a bit, but you get the idea where its going now. The second drop is basically the same as the first at the mo, plan to change it. Let me know what you think..

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nemesis this tune is a a beast
Thanks mate :) Nice to get some feedback hehe. Will probs upload the new one tonight or tomorrow. You on soundcloud?

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 12:48 pm
by aspect-dubz
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been trying to get some chilled vibe stuff out lately, would appreciate some feedback.
bass seems to be coming through a little weak on my speakers, still trying to adjust to my new headphones 8)

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 2:53 pm
by FSTZ
almost done with this one

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 3:47 pm
by continuumdnb
aspect-dubz wrote:Soundcloud
been trying to get some chilled vibe stuff out lately, would appreciate some feedback.
bass seems to be coming through a little weak on my speakers, still trying to adjust to my new headphones 8)
This is a really nice start. At 20 the repeated drum hit is a bit machine-gun like at the moment. Try playing with the velocity of each hit and switching up the envelope very slightly to help make it sound more organic. Ideally use another, very similar sample for some of the repeats.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 4:10 pm
by deadnoisesystem
DubNemesis wrote:
deadnoisesystem wrote:
DubNemesis wrote:Updated version, Wobble still needs a bit of tidying in some places and it needs filling out a bit, but you get the idea where its going now. The second drop is basically the same as the first at the mo, plan to change it. Let me know what you think..

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nemesis this tune is a a beast
Thanks mate :) Nice to get some feedback hehe. Will probs upload the new one tonight or tomorrow. You on soundcloud?
yeah mate, do so.
im on soundcloud, check my sig

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 4:16 pm
by aspect-dubz
continuumdnb wrote:
aspect-dubz wrote:Soundcloud
been trying to get some chilled vibe stuff out lately, would appreciate some feedback.
bass seems to be coming through a little weak on my speakers, still trying to adjust to my new headphones 8)
This is a really nice start. At 20 the repeated drum hit is a bit machine-gun like at the moment. Try playing with the velocity of each hit and switching up the envelope very slightly to help make it sound more organic. Ideally use another, very similar sample for some of the repeats.
yeh i actually dropped the velocity of the drums at the beginning of the second part but only just read your comment after uploading the second edit, thanks for the feedback though will get on editing the drops now :wink:

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 4:41 pm
by DubNemesis
deadnoisesystem wrote: yeah mate, do so.
im on soundcloud, check my sig
Sure that wasn't there before :o

Will check and leave feedback tonight :)