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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 3:18 am
by kontigobeats
hey man, thanks for the feedback, i agree need to add those little but important things to keep it interesting! im kinda new to producing so yea theres things i wanna do but need to learn how! like filters, automation etc
liking your track, yea seems we like the same kinda bass! the vocals are a nice addition too!

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 10:57 am
by CollisionCourse

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 11:15 am
by martello
"Languages"

http://www.martellorotativo.com/sound.mp3

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 12:00 pm
by JTL
martello wrote:"Languages"

http://www.martellorotativo.com/sound.mp3
Very mellow! I'm digging it man, that's a good basis, some vocals would go down a treat!

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 1:31 pm
by rook
Soundcloud

150 bpm, stoked on this one.

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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 3:10 pm
by CDR
Florence and the machine CDR REMIX
http://www.tracksandfields.com/songs.php?
Please leave ya comments and vote if poss....
thanks
CDR!!!!!!! :e: :lol: :D 8) :e:

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 4:50 pm
by faisal
Got to work some more on a track i think is pretty nice

still needs some fattening though..

chopped up vocals are from pitched up daft punk - too long. for those who care :)

http://soundcloud.com/faisal/battle

hope to get some feedback

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 6:21 pm
by tripwire22
Soundcloud

Hey guys just put this little bit together going for something kinda chill and trancy at the same time pllzzzz feedback me and ill feedback as well

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 7:31 pm
by Funicular
@CollisionCourse
I really liked the flow of your track. The double time housey bit went well as a break before the 2nd drop at 4:00 mark.
drum beat was good, but mayb beef up your snare/clap a bit more
keep it up man.

Here is a new track i've been working on. Lemme know what you think
Soundcloud

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 9:32 pm
by Dropkick_Kid
tripwire22 wrote:Soundcloud

Hey guys just put this little bit together going for something kinda chill and trancy at the same time pllzzzz feedback me and ill feedback as well
Yeah, I could honestly kick back, feet up and chill to this one.
The synth riff gives off a warm uplifting vibe, cool on that bro.
The sub adds to the flavor to the synth instead of distracting from it, again props.
Like the pattern switch after the second drop too, good job
But...
For some reason though, I just don't like the sound of that kick lol.
Also maybe fatten the snare? Sounds really flat to me.
Apart from that I'm digging it.
Nice work dude.

If you maybe wanna check my track while we're here, tracks in the sig.
Electro though :oops:

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 9:34 pm
by Muta
@Funicular

Diggin the choon, tho at 2:20, that snare sounds a little to snappy with too much reverb for my taste (if you get what i mean)
when those low wobbles come in it sounds very epic, Nasty somewhat. tho i must say, at some point i started to lose my intrested in the track, i felt like waiting for something which wasnn't really coming, if you get what im trying to say, tho the overal things sounds pretty awes0me :]

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 9:36 pm
by CollisionCourse
@ rook
all i can say is wow. that is very, very sick. :o

@ funivular
thanks for listening man! your track is quite sick, the reverb wobble sound nice. i think the levels are a little off on the drop, sounds like it clipping but it might be my shit ears. also i think youve rinsed the reverb, and i think the clap is a tad too loud, thats just nit picking though :D otherwise good tune

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 9:52 pm
by rook
CollisionCourse wrote:@ rook
all i can say is wow. that is very, very sick. :o
thanks man! >:D

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 9:59 pm
by Dropkick_Kid
CollisionCourse wrote:@ rook
all i can say is wow. that is very, very sick. :o
^^ This.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 6:00 am
by C AverRage
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8678858 Im new in the dubstep . But Been producing for sometime now. Let me know wat you think C AverRage

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Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 12:02 pm
by soulshynchyld
damn ya gota luv a wu remix ah
pretty much finished
but ay..cant master till i get some meen monitors!!

hope ya like wea ive taken things!!!che!!!

Soundcloud

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 12:21 pm
by slothrop
@tripwire: yeah, I generally like the tune too. Re:
dr-zitbag wrote: For some reason though, I just don't like the sound of that kick lol.
Also maybe fatten the snare? Sounds really flat to me.
Sounds to me like the snare's maybe a bit lost in the reverb? It's a matter of taste and what you're trying to do, but it might be cool to keep it a bit dryer and a bit further forward in the mix so it cuts through the ambience for a bit of contrast rather than getting lost in it? YMMV though.

@ C AverRage - nice wobbles. The drum sounds are unusual - not sure whether I like them or not actually.

My turn - bit of an experiment with using bongos layered over pitched 808 bass rather than a standard kick drum + bassline. Moody and rolling. Pretty much a skeleton at the moment - no intro, no outro, fairly basic mix etc:

Soundcloud

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 1:56 pm
by lodestone
slothrop wrote: My turn - bit of an experiment with using bongos layered over pitched 808 bass rather than a standard kick drum + bassline. Moody and rolling. Pretty much a skeleton at the moment - no intro, no outro, fairly basic mix etc:

Soundcloud

i like this a lot. the bongos give it a really cool vibe.

here's something i was fucking with last night, i'm still pretty new so any advice or feedback and i'll hit you back for sure. deffinetly easy to feel intimidated by some of the tracks you hear on here but everyone seems helpful and that's sick.

Soundcloud

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 7:21 pm
by Akoma
Soundcloud

My 3rd attempt at a dubstep tune, if anyone can give me some thoughts and ways to improve it´s much appreciated.

Cheers for listening

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 7:35 pm
by Corkz
martello wrote:"Languages"

http://www.martellorotativo.com/sound.mp3
awesome track, i agree with JTL- get a vocal on it