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Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 12:19 am
by therzbm
Legendary wrote:Dub1 wrote:
feedback would be appreciated.
I'd bring out the drums more / use more distinctive snares - i'd say thats the only thing lacking to the tune a really nice big snare hit.. its what that sort of style strives on.
couldnt agree more, seems a bit too focused on the synths, get the kick snare coming out a bit more and maybe work a little bit more on the drum pattern and it will be sounding great
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 9:20 am
by lowpass
Yeah the drums seem fairly masked they need bringing out, try cutting some of the frequency content out of the synths to help them gel together and make space for the drums
@ -boring
It has a really dark vibe to it, the vocal parts seem a little suffocated I'd cut around 1k on the other instruments to bring a bit more intelligebility through thats all I can think of though and its not really that much of an issue
@ Chewie
That tune is nice and heavy, I can't think of much to improve it tbh soz
My new tune I've moved back to reason so Im still adjusting to it, I've gotten a bit stuck so I've come to seek guidance
http://www.zshare.net/audio/59445928a9c785db/
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 10:23 am
by chewie
Cheers LP just finished this sucker off today just need to bump it up for playing out then get the sucker mastered. Big ups!
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 1:37 pm
by FSTZ1
^^^nice one man!
it's a keeper
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 8:02 pm
by feral witchchild
Just put up a rough mix of a new one on the myspazz, link in sig. Any and all comments are welcome.
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 8:49 pm
by batlogic
Hey, This is my latest attempt
steered this one clear of any wobbles, trying to explore the whole genre a bit, i hope...
X
http://soundcloud.com/batlogic/3am
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 11:26 pm
by knobgoblin
http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/518773/M15%2 ... xample.mp3
A little something I'm working on now, just drums and bass at this point, but not sure if I'm gonna finish it or not...I'm not at home now, but I'll leave some feedback on other peoples tracks when I can hear them on proper speakers.
Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 3:22 am
by deadly_habit
http://www.zippyshare.com/v/83140189/file.html
just started this one a few hours ago
going for a burial/ambient vibe
Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 8:27 am
by lowpass
Yeah the drums seem fairly masked they need bringing out, try cutting some of the frequency content out of the synths to help them gel together and make space for the drums
@ -boring
It has a really dark vibe to it, the vocal parts seem a little suffocated I'd cut around 1k on the other instruments to bring a bit more intelligebility through thats all I can think of though and its not really that much of an issue
@ Chewie
That tune is nice and heavy, I can't think of much to improve it tbh soz
@ Bat logic
lol you stayed clear of bass wobbles but theres that high wobbling sound all the way through. I thought it was pretty cool, i'd thin the synth sounds out a bit with some eq maybe
@ Knob goblin
this is sounding cool, the drums are at a nice loud level, really dark, keep at it mate
@ Deadly Habbit
This is deep man, I'm really feelin it again I'd strip away some of the frequency content of the instruments/ more layers of verb but the drums are spot on
My new tune I've moved back to reason so Im still adjusting to it, I've gotten a bit stuck so I've come to seek guidance
http://www.zshare.net/audio/59445928a9c785db/
would appreciate some feedback guys
newbie dub
Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 11:12 am
by beeliner
ez guys my first attempt @ my work in progress
slate it! like it! love it! hate it!
made using ableton live 7.3
here it is "base" by beeliner
http://soundcloud.com/beeline-b/c-users ... eliner-bee
ez
Re: newbie dub
Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 5:19 pm
by lowpass
Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 5:26 pm
by deadly_habit
Lowpass wrote:
@ Deadly Habbit
This is deep man, I'm really feelin it again I'd strip away some of the frequency content of the instruments/ more layers of verb but the drums are spot on
My new tune I've moved back to reason so Im still adjusting to it, I've gotten a bit stuck so I've come to seek guidance
http://www.zshare.net/audio/59445928a9c785db/
would appreciate some feedback guys
thanks man haven't even really started the mixdown phase yet
as far as your wip i'd layer up the snare a bit more maybe with a clap and maybe toss in some stabs in the backdrop
Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 8:46 pm
by lowpass
cool, I've got a clap in there already but I could put it higher in the mix, when you say stabs what sort of instrument did you have in mind?
Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 9:03 pm
by deadly_habit
Lowpass wrote:cool, I've got a clap in there already but I could put it higher in the mix, when you say stabs what sort of instrument did you have in mind?
maybe some rhodes, sirens classic air horn
[binge] productions
Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 11:11 pm
by [binge]
word all
new to the forum and it seems like a really kick ass community you got going on. Love the fact you have a section for works in progress as id be interested to hear some dubstep producers opinions on my productions!
I'm not strictly a dubstep producer, my tunes are more of a hybrid between Dubstep and Techno, Dubstep infused techno if you will, i hope you enjoy them!
I'll be posting more tunes in the coming days.
i don't really like posting y tracks on zshare, but i trust that people are pretty legit in this forum and wont nick things.
[binge]-'Let Them Have The Stage, As Long As I Don't Have To Be In The Crowd'
http://www.zshare.net/audio/59513027da031907/
oh and if your on soundcloud hit me up, quite active round those parts.
www.soundcloud.com/binge
www.virb.com/binge
Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 8:08 am
by beeliner
@ lowpassdub why the long face?
your track 789......... absolute filth mate!!!!! nuff said!
Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 8:29 am
by lowpass
beeliner wrote:@ lowpassdub why the long face?
your track 789......... absolute filth mate!!!!! nuff said!
lol thanks I get like that in this thread, don't take it personally.
Posted: Mon May 04, 2009 6:50 pm
by truncated
maybe i should of looked in here before posting in the dub section ah well no harm done!
Confused Stomper
http://soundcloud.com/truncated/king-k0 ... ed-stomper
or
http://www.zshare.net/audio/595904187229b3d1/
been gettiing back into making music and decided recently i'm going to run with my love for evil noises this is my current project i have open hope you lot like it!
Posted: Mon May 04, 2009 6:55 pm
by truncated
i like this, would work rather well for what you want it to!
is the finished version about?
again really feeling this got the ambience spot on
resktwo wrote:any feedback on this one would be appreciated, kinda not sure if its good or not, it's still very basic, didn't even put hats into it..
the question is: should i even work on it? my ears are'nt objective, is it interesting? does it have potential ? should i delete everything before the last loop or maybe the other way around?
http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=8be0 ... 8114394287
not sure on the first lead sound, like the second lead sound needs more weight behind it though, i like where your going though keep on pluggin away!
Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 4:58 pm
by pk-