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Posted: **Fri Apr 20, 2007 6:14 pm**

aight, this is a tune i made this morning called 'rain' - its that style you frequently see on Tempa - the simple melodies which build up to the heavy bass drop, obligatory weird sample (i chose a wicked line from Taxi Driver, it sounds dope imo)

anyway, criticisms are welcome, tell me where ive gone right and wrong as far as makin a killer riddim goes

thanks
davwwwwwwwuuuuuuuuuuunhhhhh

http://www.zshare.net/download/davwuh-rain-mp3.html

Posted: **Fri Apr 20, 2007 10:58 pm**

come on guys, you can do it

Posted: **Sat Apr 21, 2007 10:16 pm**

be a sport

Posted: **Mon Apr 23, 2007 6:32 pm**

Gonna download this when my others are done and give you feed back

Posted: **Mon Apr 23, 2007 8:02 pm**

It's got potential, think a good mix down of the sounds, and a bit more filtering and effects, with a switch in certain places this would be all good. But that's my opinion

Posted: **Mon Apr 23, 2007 8:29 pm**

really nice beat! two things tho, turn down the bass! i kno this is dubstep but i reckon it would b nice as a more ambient sounding tune. and second ting, the synth sounds that comes in first at about a min is really in your face and cud do with sum tinkering........but other than that it is a banga!

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mp3 download a tune i made this morning - criticisms welcome

mp3 download a tune i made this morning - criticisms welcome

come on