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My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 2:59 pm
by Gonzzzor
Subject says it all, here's the tune
Soundcloud
Re: My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 4:44 pm
by vyvyan
Far too wobbly for me!
The main "tyre-wobble" sounds a little bit too special to my ears. The break is quite cool though!
Nice good first work, but a "wobble specialist" could tell you more.
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Re: My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 5:32 pm
by Gonzzzor
Thanks for the input mate, glad you liked the break!
The song was produced and mastered mainly with headphones. not ideal, i know. Maybe thats some of the reason it sounds "too special" on your speakers/phones?
Love your song "Colours", amazing atmosphere!
Re: My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 6:16 pm
by PetreMathislavMusic
Gonzzzor wrote:Subject says it all, here's the tune
Soundcloud
This is psychodelic. Strange woobles but nice
Check this out:
http://soundcloud.com/petremathislavmusic/lobby
Re: My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 6:51 pm
by ohmicide
Could use some better mixing but you've definitely got some interesting sounds in there!
Re: My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 9:05 pm
by Gonzzzor
Thank you! I like your song, the break is sick!
ohmicide wrote:Could use some better mixing but you've definitely got some interesting sounds in there!
yep, I know.. I feel like mixing and mastering is where i lack the most, but i guess that's pretty universal. Thanks for the advise!
Re: My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2011 2:07 am
by kaiori breathe
One of the more inventive dubstep tunes that features wabblez I've heard lately, nice mix of deep and bro, works well, although I imagine people will be divided on that, the deep headz will probs want you to move away from the wobbles, the bro-steppers will want you to get darker etc, still, nice style and ideas, quite a fun tune in terms of the mix you've got going on. Well done. Love that guitar slide sound, works really well, if that's what it is, sounds like one, but not sure.
Re: My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2011 2:25 am
by vyvyan
+1 kaiori breathe, this track has personality, that's for sure!
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Re: My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2011 12:18 pm
by edwardjjohnston
interesting idea's !
Re: My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2011 9:38 pm
by Gonzzzor
kaiori breathe wrote:One of the more inventive dubstep tunes that features wabblez I've heard lately, nice mix of deep and bro, works well, although I imagine people will be divided on that, the deep headz will probs want you to move away from the wobbles, the bro-steppers will want you to get darker etc, still, nice style and ideas, quite a fun tune in terms of the mix you've got going on. Well done. Love that guitar slide sound, works really well, if that's what it is, sounds like one, but not sure.
Wow, I am humbled! you seem to have a lot of insight. If you are thinking about the guitar sounds at the ending of the break, that's a tweaked version of a patch called "ambient soundscape" from exode (I use reason).
Thanks for all the support guys! this is my first post on this forum, and i must say this seems like a very good community. I will definitely lurk around some more and hopefully post some new shit in the near future. Atm I'm trying to make something a bit more approachable, but it'll still be weird and psychedelic, no worries!
Btw, how do i change the topic icon?
Re: My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2011 9:52 pm
by Radiant
Gonzzzor wrote:kaiori breathe wrote:One of the more inventive dubstep tunes that features wabblez I've heard lately, nice mix of deep and bro, works well, although I imagine people will be divided on that, the deep headz will probs want you to move away from the wobbles, the bro-steppers will want you to get darker etc, still, nice style and ideas, quite a fun tune in terms of the mix you've got going on. Well done. Love that guitar slide sound, works really well, if that's what it is, sounds like one, but not sure.
Wow, I am humbled! you seem to have a lot of insight. If you are thinking about the guitar sounds at the ending of the break, that's a tweaked version of a patch called "ambient soundscape" from exode (I use reason).
Thanks for all the support guys! this is my first post on this forum, and i must say this seems like a very good community. I will definitely lurk around some more and hopefully post some new shit in the near future. Atm I'm trying to make something a bit more approachable, but it'll still be weird and psychedelic, no worries!
Btw, how do i change the topic icon?
You could try editing the first post in the topic? I don't know if that works but it should!
Re: My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2011 10:16 pm
by Gonzzzor
Can't find anything, guess you have to do it when you make the thread.. thanks for the suggestion tho!
Re: My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2011 8:41 am
by vyvyan
Well, don't be too positive: sometimes, you won't have any interesting feedback i must tell you!
Naturally, if you comment, you'll have more chances!
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Re: My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2011 9:38 am
by BLACKSMOKEMONSTER
ez!
i like the 1st wobble synth and like the break but where the tune goes a bit weird think could done things differently to keep the heavy flow going ...
not personally a massive fan of brosteppy esk dubs ....
nice ideas overall

Re: My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2011 8:31 pm
by Gonzzzor
vyvyan wrote:Well, don't be too positive: sometimes, you won't have any interesting feedback i must tell you!
Naturally, if you comment, you'll have more chances!
yes, of course. I've only made one comment outside this thread so far, will definitely work on that. remember, i've only been here two days!
BLACKSMOKEMONSTER wrote:ez!
i like the 1st wobble synth and like the break but where the tune goes a bit weird think could done things differently to keep the heavy flow going ...
not personally a massive fan of brosteppy esk dubs ....
nice ideas overall

ty! The tune i'm working on now is more constant.
will have a listen to your stuff.

Re: My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2011 9:03 pm
by Spenca
Well, it's not my cup o tea, but it's a great first attempt. My first attempt...well...let's not go there.
Re: My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2011 9:21 pm
by synaptik
This is fraking phat. Wobble...wobble...wobble... Good...cinematic...stuff. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise, mate. Carry on....
Re: My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2011 9:32 pm
by shroomhead1
I like the percussive peaky low end wobbles here, even though I'm more the mid range grind kinda guy. nice work
Re: My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 12:31 am
by DjMiLo
Dope wobbles man!!
Re: My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 11:46 pm
by Gonzzzor
Spenca wrote:Well, it's not my cup o tea, but it's a great first attempt. My first attempt...well...let's not go there.
shroomhead1 wrote:I like the percussive peaky low end wobbles here, even though I'm more the mid range grind kinda guy. nice work
DjMiLo wrote:Dope wobbles man!!
notchfiend wrote:This is fraking phat. Wobble...wobble...wobble... Good...cinematic...stuff. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise, mate. Carry on....
Thank you, thank you, thank you and a very big thank you!

This is great motivation!
I will, eventually, listen to all your stuff and comment if i have something relevant to say, I'm just so geared up and busy trying to finish the next song right now!