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lol...ya'll actually think i can't make dubstep...lol

Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 7:33 pm
by c-zar
I am new to dubstep so it does sound completely like that generic brand. But as you will see....it is superior.

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Re: lol...ya'll actually think i can't make dubstep...lol

Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 7:38 pm
by steeze
Sounds a bit sloppy to me man, too many elements that don't compliment each other. Lots of clashing frequencies, and melodies that are out of key and time with each other. Try eqing each element so they sit a little better in the mix and keep to 2-3 main musical ideas at a time. Keep at it though :)

Re: lol...ya'll actually think i can't make dubstep...lol

Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 7:48 pm
by c-zar
thats just you man....thanks though!

Re: lol...ya'll actually think i can't make dubstep...lol

Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 7:55 pm
by nylle
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probably not missin much based on what other peeps sayin bout u :cornlol:

Re: lol...ya'll actually think i can't make dubstep...lol

Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 8:01 pm
by charleswpeck
lolz at tagz

Re: lol...ya'll actually think i can't make dubstep...lol

Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 8:06 pm
by SignalRecon
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Due to uncontrollable circumstances, we ask that you do not feed the trolls/bears/egotistical douche rappers with grade 7 edukashun, that is all.

Park Maintenance.

Re: lol...ya'll actually think i can't make dubstep...lol

Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 8:24 pm
by c-zar
white people can be so corny some time ^

Re: lol...ya'll actually think i can't make dubstep...lol

Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 9:07 pm
by EmpathyDJ
>>>white people can be so corny some time ^

RACIST TROLL IS RACIST

Re: lol...ya'll actually think i can't make dubstep...lol

Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 9:23 pm
by c-zar
:dunce: :dunce: :dunce: :dunce: :dunce: :Q: :Q: :Q: :h: :h: :P :P :( :roll: :roll: :a: :a: :a: :w: :w: :w: :w: :u: :u: :q: :q: :cornlol: :cornlol: :) :) :) :) :|

Re: lol...ya'll actually think i can't make dubstep...lol

Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 9:39 pm
by Big Freq
czar is what you call a "summer cigarette"

hes out of school with nothing to do but troll

be on your way

Re: lol...ya'll actually think i can't make dubstep...lol

Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 9:56 pm
by charleswpeck
Big Freq wrote:czar is what you call a "summer cigarette"

hes out of school with nothing to do but troll

be on your way
:w: :z: :z: :z: :corndance: :corndance: :corndance: :corncry: :corncry: :corncry: :corncry: :corncry: :roll: :z: :u: :u: :u: :u:

Re: lol...ya'll actually think i can't make dubstep...lol

Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 10:09 pm
by c-zar
whatever....back to critiques. For the first dude, he is right. THat analogue'y wobble thingy that comes in in the main part needs to be taken out. It throws the whole beat off. I am not perfect.

Re: lol...ya'll actually think i can't make dubstep...lol

Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 10:11 pm
by SignalRecon
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Re: lol...ya'll actually think i can't make dubstep...lol

Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 10:26 pm
by c-zar
^fun. made me lulz.

Re: lol...ya'll actually think i can't make dubstep...lol

Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 2:52 pm
by SignalRecon
EmpathyDJ wrote:>>>white people can be so corny some time ^

RACIST TROLL IS RACIST
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Before we all let this die, I just want to say that I thoroughly enjoyed the reverse racist card drop... we can't be expected to not cry out against blatant generalisation and prejudice.

Can't let the man keep you down, hey we should make a rap video, and just like Waka Flaka Flame did in "Hard in tha Paint" - Have it stop midway through the video with with the cops showing up and a message that says "Due to a L.A. gang injunction this production was stopped" ...

And then we (45-50 hard looking white people gambling/drinking/doing drugs in the street with minors screaming/singing about commiting murder over trivial matters and our love of general illegality) could then put on a sad face and act like we are being persecuted by society, and proceed to say this would never happen in an upscale neighbourhood (you're right waka, the cops would definitely NOT be there faster than they would in the hood...)

Doing this would allow us to perpetuate to our impressionable youths that they should misdirect their anger for their personal short-comings towards society and the police because "they were dealt a losing hand" and shouldnt bother trying, therefore allowing us to keep our for profit privatized jail system full and the tax burden high.

Re: lol...ya'll actually think i can't make dubstep...lol

Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 3:06 pm
by SignalRecon
c-zar wrote:^fun. made me lulz.
Kanye said it, not me. That chat bubble is clearly pointing to him.

Re: lol...ya'll actually think i can't make dubstep...lol

Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 3:57 pm
by Lectric
Czar youve been on this forum for two years and youve proven to be its biggest troll. you shit like "im better than rusko" and that your the best on the forum for makin hip hop. now you show us this song and it sounds like an anus trying to sing. get the fuck out.

Re: lol...ya'll actually think i can't make dubstep...lol

Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 4:03 pm
by adambrown666
Dont be so sure of yourself OP, always critique your work and think of ways to make it better. Saying your work is superior just makes you sound like an asshole.

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Re: lol...ya'll actually think i can't make dubstep...lol

Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 4:05 pm
by Lectric
adambrown666 wrote:Dont be so sure of yourself OP, always critique your work and think of ways to make it better. Saying your work is superior just makes you sound like an asshole. ]
youre obviously not used to czar

Re: lol...ya'll actually think i can't make dubstep...lol

Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 4:37 pm
by SignalRecon
Hey czar:

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