dramax - One Day I Smile (Dubstep/Juke/138BPM) (WIP)
Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2011 8:08 pm
Soundcloud
Hello guys,
I'm pretty new to making beats and this track which I made most of yesterday is not really similar to the stuff I usually make (more on the deep side), but I would be really happy if I could get some feedback. It's not mastered so you should probably turn your speakers up a bit.
I know the vocal sample could use some work, but what exactly would you suggest to make it fit better with the rest of the track? Or should I get rid of it?
Another thing is the sub coming in for the first time at about 1.07, when the kicks are pitched up. I think it is not audible enough, but maybe that's just my speakers... Any suggestions how I could make it stand out more?
I would be glad to post a 320 when the song is finished (and if someone wants one).
Thanks in advance!
Hello guys,
I'm pretty new to making beats and this track which I made most of yesterday is not really similar to the stuff I usually make (more on the deep side), but I would be really happy if I could get some feedback. It's not mastered so you should probably turn your speakers up a bit.
I know the vocal sample could use some work, but what exactly would you suggest to make it fit better with the rest of the track? Or should I get rid of it?
Another thing is the sub coming in for the first time at about 1.07, when the kicks are pitched up. I think it is not audible enough, but maybe that's just my speakers... Any suggestions how I could make it stand out more?
I would be glad to post a 320 when the song is finished (and if someone wants one).
Thanks in advance!
I will play around with editing the vocals and maybe add/change some sounds and post a new version soon.