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Arnolfini - F.A.M.E (feat TG)
Posted: Thu Nov 17, 2011 11:33 pm
by Arnolfini
New grime track... well.. my first grime track haha.
let me know what you think!
thanks
Chris
Soundcloud
Re: Arnolfini - F.A.M.E (feat TG)
Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 2:19 am
by Riich
nice for a first grime track! idk it seems like the rapping is off or something.
and i think you should make it fade in with beginning, that beginning synth is a little harsh.
I like your main bassline tho, its pretty tight man.
can you tell me what you think of my track in the link below?
http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=225006
Re: Arnolfini - F.A.M.E (feat TG)
Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:44 am
by Arnolfini
thanks man, yeah i did notice that after the mc had left :/ still were gonna be doing another track together soon, so ill make sure its tight

thanks for the feedback though
Re: Arnolfini - F.A.M.E (feat TG)
Posted: Sat Nov 19, 2011 9:13 am
by AirRake
chill tune dude, only thing i would say is the vocals are a little consistant. If you added a nice long break in between the verses it would create some suspense or tension making it less conistant. Nice track though dude keep it up!
