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Hi people!

I wrote this tune a couple of months ago and would appreciate some feedback. It's a low bitrate version as I'm hoping to get it released at some point.

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The reverb tail on the snare ends very abruptly, bit jarring in places. Liking the pads and synth interplay, weaves together nicely. Tune gets a bit repetitive from 3m43s onwards, like it's the same ideas being run through again.

Mixdown is nice, snare aside.

Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated. The reverb on the snare was intentional. It cuts off just as the kick hits. If it doesn't work for you that's cool

Sounds sick man, nice job.

Thanks alpz, much appreciated. Listened to your tune too and am really liking it. My friend would love a 320 copy of that!

Toby_Dwinger wrote:Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated. The reverb on the snare was intentional. It cuts off just as the kick hits. If it doesn't work for you that's cool

I know what he means about the snare. Zomby does the same in Spliff Dub (the original remix, not any of the remix remixes) but that just adds to the tune, I enjoy your snare. In fact it's almost identical. Sounding tight man, and the mix down is legit.

Thanks mate, loving Ripples too. I'm cool with wub not liking the snare, music is very much a matter of opinion, and what works for one man doesn't necessarily work for another!

Toby_Dwinger wrote:Thanks alpz, much appreciated. Listened to your tune too and am really liking it. My friend would love a 320 copy of that!

Soundcloud download is a 320, enjoy. :>

put an actual reverb on the snare or change it.

That being said, With that pad, you could make some really funky stuff man, pretty inspirational listen man.

zerbaman wrote:put an actual reverb on the snare or change it.

I'm afraid the snare stays! Like I said earlier, it was intentional. I'm happy with the snare, for me it works

Like it, the track has got a nice flow. I only think the twisted reece sounds a bit too harsh in relation in the 1:38-2:03 part of the track, it works well in the part right after though.

ramses020 wrote:Like it, the track has got a nice flow. I only think the twisted reece sounds a bit too harsh in relation in the 1:38-2:03 part of the track, it works well in the part right after though.

Could be something to do with it only being a 128kbps mixdown perhaps? Actually, thinking about it, it could be only 96kbps - I don't remember, and deleted the file after uploading it to SoundCloud!

Just out of curiosity, are you sending 320s around?

zerbaman wrote:Just out of curiosity, are you sending 320s around?

If you'd like a 320 PM me your email address