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Kid Sensha - Flay (First Dub)
Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 1:36 am
by ellipsis...
Hello all, I'm Kid Sensha, and this is a track, "Flay."
Please, go with the title, and tear me to shreds. I need to learn.
http://virb.com/1240474392407762
Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 1:53 am
by marsyas
hmmmn, and the tune is where?
Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 1:59 am
by ellipsis...
Edited. Sorry about that!
Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 10:14 am
by horse
loving the bleepy, clicky percussion.
real emotionless, robot minmal shit
i think your bass needs some work - its not nearly weighty enoughand theres a lot of high frequencies flying around
also i would lose the vocal sample - it doesnt really add anything and doesnt suit the vibe of the track
but everything else im really liking
hit me up if and when you finish it cuz i would love to hear it
Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 9:00 pm
by ellipsis...
Fixed the bass, removed the sample.
http://virb.com/1240474392407762
Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 10:21 am
by horse
yeah much better - good fucking tune this mate
any chance of grabbing a 320?
Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 11:32 pm
by ellipsis...
horse wrote:any chance of grabbing a 320?
Certainly.
I changed the mixing and the mastering, and chopped about thirty seconds off. The bass should play nice with everything else instead of pinching the mix so hard. The synth sweeps at the end are also in key, now that I've googled "music theory" and I know what key IS.
Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 12:52 am
by X-Zero
Yeah man, I'm feeling this.
I really like the way it progresses and adds more elements.
Thanks for the 320.
Hero control is a heavy tune as well.
Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 8:46 am
by horse
Ellipsis... wrote:The synth sweeps at the end are also in key, now that I've googled "music theory" and I know what key IS.
cheers for the 320