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trojdan facelift - foxes (garage / bass)

Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2014 2:20 am
by ZB
wrote a tune in a summery girly mood:
Soundcloud

feedback would b cool.
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Re: trojdan facelift - foxes (garage / bass)

Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2014 7:13 am
by NinjaEdit
The kick and especially the snare are a bit quiet.

Re: trojdan facelift - foxes (garage / bass)

Posted: Thu Dec 25, 2014 2:44 am
by ZB
cheers man for pointing out - yeah i noticed that when i put on head phones too so fixed it up. xx

Re: trojdan facelift - foxes (garage / bass)

Posted: Thu Dec 25, 2014 3:38 am
by CRoW_Dubstep123
the mix could use a bit, the brassy phet bass has a peak in the mid range that is just annihilating my headphone, other than that i enjoy the vibes homie, really like the shakers, nice and clean

Re: trojdan facelift - foxes (garage / bass)

Posted: Fri Dec 26, 2014 11:31 am
by Some_Guy
very nice vibes man. but i think you could have done more by adding more different sounds. also some panning with the high end stuff might sound nice.
good job and continue :)

Re: trojdan facelift - foxes (garage / bass)

Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2014 1:43 am
by dpwb
yeah id say the mix is a little flat. try expanding the stereo spread on stuff like mentions above. also the main flute melody bit needs some more character. maybe try some slight modulation via effects and or automation.

Re: trojdan facelift - foxes (garage / bass)

Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2014 5:48 pm
by dougriley
Hah summer girly mood!

Great production man. I like everything. I just feel like each section is drawn out too far. I go from loving the new layer to wishing it would've gone away a few bars back.